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作者: I_Am_Noice
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It's story of my MC, being given some powers that allow him to copy(?????) abilities and assimilate them along with world travel. Read more to see(?) him Noice Now, I don't want anyone complain and rant in the reviews, do whatever you wanna do in comments but reviews, be sure to be absolutely truthful to both yourself and to this FF. And please read till atleast 10-12 chapters before review Cause there is nothing worse than giving fake bad reviews.

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Chapter 1Chapter-1 : Boooooomm!!! Powers

[ Name : Bartholomew 'Bobby' Banning

Race : Human

Age : 19 years ]

[Abilities :

Copy (cards) : Able to duplicate abilities and skills of other people in form of cards. {Lvl-1}

To copy cards, you have to be in range of 1 meter of the target.

Can only use 10 cards at a time.

Copying time depends on level of the card and the ability.

Assimilate : A subsidiary ability of Copy (cards), Assimilate cards after a period of time. Assimilation time depends on on level of the card. {Lvl-10(max)}

World Travel : Can jump into any universe randomly.

Every world has a mission to complete, after completing, you can decide to stay jump into another World. ]

I opened my eyes as a screen filled my eyes with these words appearing on it.

I tried to look around but I was suddenly bombarded with a lot of memories.

These were my memories.

I was Bartholomew Banning, I remember living a pretty average life till now. Watching Netflix, hanging out with friends, chilling at home, enjoying myself at weekends and etc...

Strangely enough, I couldn't remember much about my personal life.

But suddenly I am here, floating in this void.

A wave of excitement rushed through me as I thought of future possibilities, with these power, no matter which world I go to, I would become powerful nonetheless.

I saw the screen in front of me and pressed at the World Travel ability.

Suddenly my head started spinning as I felt myself being stretched in many un-humanely manners.

The World around me warped as a bright white light assaulted my eyes.

A/N : rarity, power and skill ranking of cards

White

Yellow

Purple

Black

Red

Golden

Order :

White < Yellow < Purple < Black < Red < Golden

A/N : Comment 'Noice' if you like the chapter

Add the fan fic to your library and vote with power stones.

And review Noicely please

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Crimson_AssassinLv12

Just gonna give an honest review on my thoughts until this point, keep in mind I am only on chapter 5 when im dropping this and this review while explain why. Writing Quality: 3/5, there are many grammar mistakes, not enough to ruin the story but its just a little annoying to see them constantly, and i personally dont like first person pov, i find it makes things more awkward to read and write and doesnt convey everything as well, at least in my opinion. Updating Stability: 5/5, no idea, figured id give 5 stars cause i dont wanna mark it down if its great. Story Development: 3/5, right in the beginning MC gets thrown into a different world after being introduced to his abilities. we are given absolutely no explanation on MCs background and are immediately tossed into the plot. after MC goes into this world, he gets pretty overpowered really quickly and gets rich and profiecient in many things, but there is very very little explanation on how, like he gets rich and all we know is that he just hacked some accounts and stole money, and then used that money to buy stuff from the dark web, like way more than he should be able to buy with the money he had, and who knows how he got connections to the dark web in the first place. also, author apparently does no research on the things that MC is proficient in, like MC “heals” someone by duct taping their wound and giving them “medicines” and bam theyre healthy. Basically, its completely unrealistic. Character Design: 3/5, i generally like OP characters, but this one doesnt seem to have any personality or motivation whatsoever, and i think this ties back to the fact that we have no knowledge of his background, and he has no hopes to get back to his world or anything, its like his goal is to get OP but for literally no reason. As of chapter 5, there are no other important characters introduced. World Background: 4/5, so MC hops to dimensions of movies and tv shows, which to me sounds like a poor excuse for the author to not have to come up with original world building, however, the author does an ok job at explaining the world so far, so that even someone such as myself who has never watched the movies at least knows whats going on. Overall, pretty mediocre, i wouldnt really recommend, HOWEVER, do keep in mind that i only read until chapter 5 and it may turn worse or better in later chapters, so check it out for yourself.

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