webnovel
Z3RG102077
Z3RG102077Lv64yr
2020-11-22 17:51

NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE

Ultimate player

I_Am_Noice
4.7
33 Chs

Liked by 17 people

LIKE
Replies2
I_Am_Noice
I_Am_NoiceAuthor

Noice

4yr
2
IPreferLonerMc
IPreferLonerMcLv5

Wow, this review is very truthful 🍇

I_Am_Noice:Noice
4yr
2
Other Reviews
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

this shit is dope. its interesting, the power.. the story is too but its the MC's power thats interesting. I read 2 bks with the same power, both amazing but sadly dropped, hopefully this dosnt. The MC isnt annoying or that cringe, same with the dialogues,, so thats nice. overall the FF is pretty noice and if u enjoy interesting powers, you'll like it. power....basically steal abilities through cards

4yr

Crimson_Assassin
Crimson_AssassinLv12

Just gonna give an honest review on my thoughts until this point, keep in mind I am only on chapter 5 when im dropping this and this review while explain why. Writing Quality: 3/5, there are many grammar mistakes, not enough to ruin the story but its just a little annoying to see them constantly, and i personally dont like first person pov, i find it makes things more awkward to read and write and doesnt convey everything as well, at least in my opinion. Updating Stability: 5/5, no idea, figured id give 5 stars cause i dont wanna mark it down if its great. Story Development: 3/5, right in the beginning MC gets thrown into a different world after being introduced to his abilities. we are given absolutely no explanation on MCs background and are immediately tossed into the plot. after MC goes into this world, he gets pretty overpowered really quickly and gets rich and profiecient in many things, but there is very very little explanation on how, like he gets rich and all we know is that he just hacked some accounts and stole money, and then used that money to buy stuff from the dark web, like way more than he should be able to buy with the money he had, and who knows how he got connections to the dark web in the first place. also, author apparently does no research on the things that MC is proficient in, like MC “heals” someone by duct taping their wound and giving them “medicines” and bam theyre healthy. Basically, its completely unrealistic. Character Design: 3/5, i generally like OP characters, but this one doesnt seem to have any personality or motivation whatsoever, and i think this ties back to the fact that we have no knowledge of his background, and he has no hopes to get back to his world or anything, its like his goal is to get OP but for literally no reason. As of chapter 5, there are no other important characters introduced. World Background: 4/5, so MC hops to dimensions of movies and tv shows, which to me sounds like a poor excuse for the author to not have to come up with original world building, however, the author does an ok job at explaining the world so far, so that even someone such as myself who has never watched the movies at least knows whats going on. Overall, pretty mediocre, i wouldnt really recommend, HOWEVER, do keep in mind that i only read until chapter 5 and it may turn worse or better in later chapters, so check it out for yourself.

4yr
scias85
scias85Lv7

Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 2/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 5/5 [img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap]

4yr
CryingJoker
CryingJokerLv4

The story so far is good and one of the very few involving the John Wick verse, really appreciate it. Hope the author cover similar action packed movies for his story like Terminator, mad max, Matrix, bad boys and many more verse. Over all good job author.[img=recommend]

4yr
madman1010
madman1010Lv4

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
DILL_100
DILL_100Lv3

........................................................................................................................................................

4yr
ProfessorLucifer
ProfessorLuciferLv12

When the Devil walks the Earth and finds his first love... evil shall be released.666.When the Devil walks the Earth and finds his first love... evil shall be released.666.When the Devil walks the Earth and finds his first love... evil shall be released.

4yr
poorjoe
poorjoeLv1

The story development is good but can you remove the repetitive actions? Like I get that he's killing Nazis and taking card from scientists but its getting boring now. Can you like involve more of the plot and less grinding? And lastly, PLEASE UPDATE. Gonna ask you now, have you abandoned the story because it's already almost half a month since last update. Ciao!

4yr
DaoOfGay
DaoOfGayLv5

There are a lot of words that someone can use to describe this novel. Good. Marvelous. Amazing. Delightful. Impressive. Interesting. Gorgeous. But I... I have the power to use one of the most powerful words in the human vocabulary, the powerful: NOICE

4yr
Related Stories

Sedition (Star Wars, separatist SI)

This is the tale of a young female that was sick her entire life and when she finally dies her soul occupied the body of little merchant princes. Read for your enjoyment, I just want to spread the good works of talented people. Follow the links and support the creators. "I will be updating this novel from the forums once a month(if there is any), so don't complain if there is nothing to read, I'm as big of a reader as any of you are XP" This novel I bring to you from forums that not so many had visited and it's hard to find constantly updated stories. Forum stories of origin: https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/sedition-star-wars-separatist-si.546136/reader/ All right for star wars and etc are reserved by their respected owned, this is work of fanfiction and made by [Belial666] Author

Terrier · Movies
Not enough ratings
48 Chs

She's A Grimm

Menace Whittaker has always been different and has always been shunned because of that reason. For as long as she can remember, she has always been able to see normal-looking people with another face lying underneath. Faces only you could see and hear from the fairytales you get told when you were a kid. Now, on the move to another state to find her biological mother and hope for a break from the dangerous life of what she is, Menace instead finds herself meeting more people who'll help her accept who she truly is. This time, she realizes something. She's not the only one in the world. "Her Legacy is just the beginning." {Ranked #1 - Trubel (January 2023)} {Ranked #1 - TheresaRubel (January 2023)} {Ranked #1 - Blutbad (January 2023)} {Ranked #1 - Meisner (March 2023)} {Ranked #1 - RosaleeCalvert (March 2023)} {Ranked #1 - Wesen (June 2023)}

Ronaliza_18 · Movies
Not enough ratings
17 Chs

The Race: The Tale of Love and Betrayal

She was like ice and He was like fire and both their fates got tangled together with a race looking for one man. The man who was responsible for the sufferings that they both endured in their lives. The man who was also planning to introduce the impossible into the world and also rule over it with his wicked schemes. The man that they both swore to get revenge on and destroy him due to all the pain that he caused. Join Patricia and Isaac as they race through their adventures which will lead them to the man that caused pain and suffering into their lives. Whilst also discovering the man's sickening plans to change the world and how they put a stop to it. IT STARTED WITH A RACE AND IT WILL END WITH A RACE.

LEAH_VURAYAYI · Movies
Not enough ratings
35 Chs
Login