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2020-11-19 18:40

this shit is dope. its interesting, the power.. the story is too but its the MC's power thats interesting. I read 2 bks with the same power, both amazing but sadly dropped, hopefully this dosnt. The MC isnt annoying or that cringe, same with the dialogues,, so thats nice. overall the FF is pretty noice and if u enjoy interesting powers, you'll like it. power....basically steal abilities through cards

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I_Am_Noice
I_Am_NoiceAuthor

Noice!!

Traps_Are_Gay
Traps_Are_GayLv14

books

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

short form. i was lazy to write 3 extra letters

Traps_Are_Gay:books
Traps_Are_Gay
Traps_Are_GayLv14

I don't even remember typing this to be 100% honest like u genuinely don't care about short form or most grammatical mistakes did I even write this?

amaturewriter:short form. i was lazy to write 3 extra letters
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

u typed book...so i assumed u were pointing it out since i wrote bk

Traps_Are_Gay:I don't even remember typing this to be 100% honest like u genuinely don't care about short form or most grammatical mistakes did I even write this?
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

Bro is this harem....?

I_Am_Noice:Noice!!
SpackRox
SpackRoxLv13

Can you please tell me the name of those two books with similar powers?

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

I forgot the name...but of one em was chinese ff... search up marvel card power or card power...and check in both ff and novel section

SpackRox:Can you please tell me the name of those two books with similar powers?
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Crimson_Assassin
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Just gonna give an honest review on my thoughts until this point, keep in mind I am only on chapter 5 when im dropping this and this review while explain why. Writing Quality: 3/5, there are many grammar mistakes, not enough to ruin the story but its just a little annoying to see them constantly, and i personally dont like first person pov, i find it makes things more awkward to read and write and doesnt convey everything as well, at least in my opinion. Updating Stability: 5/5, no idea, figured id give 5 stars cause i dont wanna mark it down if its great. Story Development: 3/5, right in the beginning MC gets thrown into a different world after being introduced to his abilities. we are given absolutely no explanation on MCs background and are immediately tossed into the plot. after MC goes into this world, he gets pretty overpowered really quickly and gets rich and profiecient in many things, but there is very very little explanation on how, like he gets rich and all we know is that he just hacked some accounts and stole money, and then used that money to buy stuff from the dark web, like way more than he should be able to buy with the money he had, and who knows how he got connections to the dark web in the first place. also, author apparently does no research on the things that MC is proficient in, like MC “heals” someone by duct taping their wound and giving them “medicines” and bam theyre healthy. Basically, its completely unrealistic. Character Design: 3/5, i generally like OP characters, but this one doesnt seem to have any personality or motivation whatsoever, and i think this ties back to the fact that we have no knowledge of his background, and he has no hopes to get back to his world or anything, its like his goal is to get OP but for literally no reason. As of chapter 5, there are no other important characters introduced. World Background: 4/5, so MC hops to dimensions of movies and tv shows, which to me sounds like a poor excuse for the author to not have to come up with original world building, however, the author does an ok job at explaining the world so far, so that even someone such as myself who has never watched the movies at least knows whats going on. Overall, pretty mediocre, i wouldnt really recommend, HOWEVER, do keep in mind that i only read until chapter 5 and it may turn worse or better in later chapters, so check it out for yourself.

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