Transcending Paragon

what a horrible story, just one protagonist distributing powers to asta etc, just a whore from asta, actor at most is 15 years old,why practically every story on this site has a protagonist distributing powers and following the main character? beta mcs

You should use this as wallpaper

After reading up to CH 9, I understand a little bit .. MC is basically a good person, who spreads goodness here and there and has a hero syndrome .. Well he's a good person .. yes, a good person .. So as a selfish person, well that's it.. there are no comments .. So I just took the middle value ..

Great story so far, not much I can say except how good this is and I'm loving it. keep up the great work, hopefully one day we can get double releas 🤞

it's just another primitive piece of garbage where the retarded mc gets whatever he wants. The "harem" is a gotta catch-em-all basic, overused and ful of cliches the members have low to no personality. Honestly it's better to just read something else because this "fanfic" it's just garbage.

This fanfic has all the clichés I hate (Sharingan, super sayan god lineage, affection system for even a monkey to pick up girls, op mc, the system becomes a member of the harem and other members of the harem coming from nowhere with no real relationship development in addition to resumed interactions and time skip). But the fact that I don't like it is not the biggest reason to give it only 3 stars (I don't like it but others may like it). The reason for giving 3 stars is that there is nothing new here, this fic is equal to 300 others that were posted and abandoned on the webnovel. Tis fic is absolutely average, there is nothing good or bad that stands out (besides being just another cliche).

En, nothing much I can say I'd say it's good, it's not like I dislike Beta MC as long as it's tolerable. But anyways I like the story is going that's all, but I advise you not to make the Protagonist too much stuck up with his family thing, it's a hindrance to his advancement.

Sorry for mistakes English is not my language. The author I have a question why did you even write this garbage? To clarify, I gave a chance to this work 5 times while reading. Feeling as if spat in the face after reading. The hero of your work has a feeling that he fell headlong down at birth, otherwise the stupidity of his actions is difficult to clarify. He has many powerful skills, his soul absorbs the experience, knowledge, skills, and worldview of the Jade Emperor, if he himself cannot use his head so let his wife, the goddess, lead him by the hand, she will definitely not be so stupid. After all, a more powerful soul should have pressed on him, and in 9 years since at least some action began, he should not have changed so sickly, we are not talking about the fact that he is a newborn, he lived 1 life experience that he knows 2 skills put pressure on the mind and thinking, nothing of his former self would have remained during this time. The action also raises questions if you do the character with the manners of the protagonist, justice, honor, and in general then you had to replace him with the main character of the main work, and so he drags behind the hero of the work helps and teaches him if the reader would like something like that he would have read the original. The meaning of reading such a work is 0. Honestly, I do not understand all these fan fictions that are written by the current so that the hero created by the author of this fan fiction would walk next to the hero of the original work, then it makes sense to read it if it is like the original of the current is compressed and the main characters are larger.

ThIs is his and charlottes daughter

past tense is messed up. grammar is pretty bad for a rewrite. The plot is questionable and flawed .

Trash , because: - MC beta 💩 - Mc OP but stupid - Cultivation 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩 - Chinese style. - Author virgin / caste [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

You messed it up, when you mixed Cultivation with Japanese Anime. , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . That's all.

I bet his son would look like this

Nothing to say really just another basic wish fulfillment fanfic if your looking for depth then don't read this. If you're looking to waste you're time then do read this fanfic.

I read this because there is an anti-hero tag, and it turns out to be mehhh, I suggest you remove the tag, mc here looks like a kind-hearted fool

mc stupid and good person * i hate good person * klise shounen mc 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

have not read this might be good might not but i have not read as to why i have not read this is because the synopsis line "I need you to be my husband" like wtf and if she wants him to be her husband why all the bad shit that is told before that line like do every isekai or reincarnation mc needs a tragic back story and i know this is a fanfic with wish fulfillment but that line just takes my interest away from it

I found this fanfics very enjoyable,but a saw that people didn't like the story because the Mc wants to save people or help them and because he helped Asta which is normal considering that he liked his character and that he was reborn as a member of the church where Asta and his brother lived. I gotta say people like you disgust me, it's like every Mc that help his family is a pussy and when he helps people he is a beta. What disgust me even more is that people agree with this, post a 1 star review and then spout bulsh*t to other people and with that comes a low review and in turn this fanfics is not popular. I say it once again but people that post's such sh*t disgust me and even more so when you check his profile and see that this person is just a little shit that throw hate to 5-10 per day, f*cking bulsh*t, go hang yourself.

I really dont understand people with their rating skills and ideas. So far, this story seem to be more like a wish fulfilment story with this utterly disgusting harem thing added to it. Collecting women like pokemon. Its like he just wants to do it with any women that moves. I can ignore the grammatical errors but the pokemon harem thing is just a deal breaker for me. Had this been a harem with only 5 women max, it would've been a better story. The story wasted so many chapters for just the harem part that without it could've progressed the story so much.

Ignoring some weird sentences, it's so-so, the start wasn't really interesting and captivating tho, just gotta endure, and just make up something in your mind to make it better, for yourself of course