The Fantastic Five.

It's a wonderful narrative that teenagers who are just starting to make friends would be able to relate to. It's admirable that you had the guts to attempt such a premise in your work. Strongly suggested. To pass the time, read a slice-of-life novel like this one. I really appreciate it when you develop characters because it's simple to read and extremely simple for the brain to comprehend. I am reminded of my youth by it. I appreciate the book.

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This novel is really well-made and easy to understand. The story is different from other books like it, which makes it interesting and fun to read. The way the author writes is amazing and brings the characters to life.

wow I love the book so much I wish I could see more

This is a great slice of life novel! It got good characters, good pace, and great overall writing quality! I think of making chapter more lengthy Good luck!

It is a quite nice and understandable novel... 😘 the story is different from the novels of this genre and it is interesting, I will be waiting for more chapters

The concept is nice and writing style and story's flow is good. The plot is nice and character designs are great. However I'd like to suggest you to separate the paragraphs each time a different character speaks, scene changes or perspective changes. this story has good potential

Alright you might not like my review but here it is. I'm not always into slice of life type works but this one is good and has a steady pace. The dialogue and I'm guilty of this too may need to be read aloud by the author in the editing process. Some of the wording is more formal then the context requires but that is my incredibly specific nit pick. As in if I absolutely had to find a flaw this really good work that was it.

This is slice of life novel type to pass your time. It's easy to read and very easy for brain to digest, I like it very much with character you build. It makes me remember youth. Thanks for the novel

Feels like a casual life of five girls. New genre for me so, will read more. It's interesting though.

It's a very simple yet interesting slice-of life story of a five young girls as friends, the starting was also good with a loving family showing that the mc's parents love science.

I do enjoy the story. It's light and easy to read. Great momentum in the each chapter so you don't get bored. Keep up the good work author ✧(◕‿◕)°˖✧

it is definitely an interesting story worth reading but yet somehow I was surprised at how the author ended their chapters. this may only be an early chapter thing since I've only read five chapters; but keep up the good work.

An amazing and personal book written with precision that makes you feel that they are life. The background of the world is simple and easy to understand. It is comforting

It is a cool story, with which adolescents who are beginning to form their group of friends will identify. It's good that you dared to write a story with this type of plot! Highly recommended.

I would first like to say the cover is hilarious, so now I wanna say it has potential.

Things I like: -Natasha is a very friendly and social person, and I like her as the main character. I like how her friends have different personalities and quirks and the special things about certain characters like how Olivia doesn’t want to celebrate her birthday. -I really enjoy the length of the chapters. It’s refreshing that it’s quite short and so I’m able to focus on the chapters one at a time. -I like how there are different details on the Indian clothing! I grew up in India so it’s cool to read about the characters wearing different Indian clothing, but be careful since not everyone knows what ”kurta” is etc. so you might need an index. Things that can be improved: -for the plot I think things can be more exciting if you have something driving and motivating the characters. Right now the chapters move forward because the speaker describes everything that happens to them and around them. It’s good in that it feels like the reader is living with the character and seeing glimpses into their daily life. But I don’t know if that is enough to keep reader interest for all the story, even if this is supposed to be a slice of life/teen story. A suggestion is you can try to focus on one event that pushes Natasha and her friends to want something, and how conflict comes in the way will make the story more interesting. The plan for Olivia’s birthday was great but maybe adding some more serious stakes would be cool too. -Speech/dialogue should start new paragraphs otherwise the sentences look too blocked together, and it’s less clear grammatically. Overall a promising story and I think it has potential to be developed into a great teen coming-of-age story! Keep it up!

I usually am not a big fan of laid back or slice of life stories, but THIS is gOOood😩✨ Very well written and has good pacing👌 And I like how every one from the big five has their own unique personality and style (≧∀≦)ゞ Viri Gud!ヾ(≧▽≦*)o

It's an amazingly good read with lots of good slice of life moments ! Easy to interpret and the characters are life like...will be awaiting more chapters from the author.

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