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Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

作者: Reili
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This book is finished! Please give my next book a try as your support helps me greatly! The book is called Abyssal Awakening! I'm captured? Fine, I can't help it since I can't move. Experimented on? At least give me some anaesthetic. I'm freed? Let me get some revenge. Want to plead for your life? Sorry, this miss here holds a grudge. I destroyed the lab so now let me explore this world freely. I somehow joined Mr Hero's party. Fine, he seems fun. "Aiya, how cruel. For the honour of being a hero you'd kill this missy huh?" She smiled whilst bleeding out. "Che, you still have the mind to joke right now?" He said with a glare. "What is life if not to enjoy every moment? Since I'm going to die and I can't avenge myself, I hope someone else does." "No one will. You were the only one who was more powerful than I with your Nanomancy. Now with you out of th-" "Hush child. I'm trying to die in peace here." "But I'm ol-!" "Ap! Good children don't disturb their elders." "But yo-!" "Bye~" She grinned before losing strength. "FUCK!" … Why am I sleeping in the snowfields? Mr Wolves are growling at me. Hungry huh?... Me too. This is my second book please have mercy on this author. Enjoy. Cover was drawn by the amazing Aoi Ogata Nanomancer=A mage that uses nanobots Discord Server: https://discord.gg/vrdTSkj8Va

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Clain_Rivee
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After reading 181 chapters and enjoying the story over the course of a couple days I felt like I owed it to the author to leave a review. My review will be slightly harsh, as I really do enjoy the story and I feel the author has talent and room to improve. World building This is where I felt the story was sadly lacking. Most LitRPGs or stories in general have some overarching theme. Take a look at novels like Overgeared, Solo Leveling, Legendary Moonlight Sculptor, Everyone Else is a Returnee. RPG elements are an integral part of these stories and have been incorporated in a way that makes them absolutely essential. Dungeons become a place to train awakened humans to defeat whatever opposition humanity faces. Nanomancer Reborn has no overarching theme and meanders endlessly, quite often I feel like I'm reading someone play a MMORPG never veering away from the endless dungeon grind. As I keep reading I continue to have so many questions. Why are there dungeons in this story? What planet is the main character even on? Is it earth? What opposition does the planet face? Why is there no main antagonist? If the MC used to be a tier 6 human then what about the other tiers? What are the main goals of the MC? Sadly 181 chapters in and there is no "plot" besides the MC grinding dungeons with her friends. The only things I know about this world is that there's a place called New York and that there's dungeons. But the story never answers why there are dungeons, or how they came to be, or even if this planet is Earth, as some of the geographical locations are different. Characters I really enjoy the characters in this novel. Shiro is quite the lovable protagonist, and a certified badass to the core. It's quite fun to read the character interactions with her friends and her escapades, however, no characters are without fault and there are quite a few things I would like to point out. One of the things that stood out to me in the first few chapters in this novel is how eager Shiro was to form a team, seeing as she was betrayed by her former teammates and killed. I understand there is a difference between grooming someone from youth and picking up random teammates, but I do find it odd how Shiro never shows any form of suspicion or PTSD from betrayal. The development of many characters are severely lacking, namely Lyrica and Madison. In recent chapters I've seen many commentators become increasingly annoyed at how Shiro seems to hand everything to Lyrica, someone already with a golden spoon, calling her a "leech" and such. Honestly, I'd have to agree with their sentiments, as I do find it strange that two random strays that Shiro picked up develop both hidden classes and hidden proficiency rising to the level of Shiro with ease. I think a great way to appease both the commentators and develop the characters a bit would be to shift the POV to the side characters and show them struggling in a dungeon and getting some decent loot drops rather than having Shiro hand them everything they need.

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I thought the novel was incredible, and I was always curious to read the next chapter. Even the author made a serious mistake, in my opinion. As much as it has a main female character, the novel is MAINLY Male leading. Lyrica was introduced since the beginning of the series, there was always evidence of romance with her, but it was always postponed. After a long time, Nan tian appears chasing MC, being a perfect prototype for women (the most beautiful thing in the world, he never had an interest in women, he even hides his face so as not to let his enemies (women) see how beautiful he is) . So far so good, because she had other signs of men falling in love with MC, and since she is a beautiful woman, is perfectly normal. This until the Watchman appears, and cause a "trauma". After that the author practically started to force Nan tian down his throat, pushing Lyrica away, and making the romance between nantian and the MC totally forced, with continuous needs to stay close, cute jokes and with double (and mostly disgusting) jokes happening all over moment ... Honestly there are a lot of episodes that I started to just skip 80% of it just because of the forced bar, and Shiro's extremely shy and forced and shy new personality. I mean, I can forgive the author if more than 50% of the people who read are women. But I am sure that more than 80% are men. Are you really putting together a "perfect" male character for a romance made mainly for men? I would understand if Nan Tian had appeared in the place of lyrica at the beginning of the story, until then the bond of both would be justifiable. But seriously, Lyrica was thrown aside ?? I find it really disappointing for a novel that I really liked to have gone so badly. Because of how it started I think it is unfair to give only 3 stars, but after the watchman I also think it is unfair to give 4 stars or more.

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