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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv54yr
2020-07-30 23:20

500 chapters of yuri bait, then all of a sudden Nan tian is all over the place... As much as i loved this story, i don't like how she has become the invalid who always need Nan tian to save her. or how he is always with her... I just can't keep reading after this huge disappointment. Can any1 spoil me if she ends up with nan tian later so i can remove the bookmark?

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ERROR404PAGENULL0
ERROR404PAGENULL0Lv12

She does. Also book gets worse by each chapter now. I already stopped reading this ****. Its quality now is "trash kill it"

Psechi
PsechiLv15

I also stopped reading when the extremely anoying stalker showed back up. Thanks for the info, removing from library now.

ERROR404PAGENULL0:She does. Also book gets worse by each chapter now. I already stopped reading this ****. Its quality now is "trash kill it"
rena_ok
rena_okLv15

I don't know why is yuri so important to you, I think story itself is more important then yuri or harem or Nan Tian.

Duckfero
DuckferoLv4

The problem is not yuri, but BxG tend to have the ML superior to the FL and somehow protect/save her, and it just feel wrong when the FL is OP. If the author make the ML strong, the OP FL would become a "lady in distress" , but if they make the ML weak, readers will say he doesn't deserve her. So I think the best solution for OP FL is no romance at all, or yuri.

rena_ok:I don't know why is yuri so important to you, I think story itself is more important then yuri or harem or Nan Tian.
hydraspare
hydraspareLv14

So if I understood, she starts to rely on someone?

rena_ok
rena_okLv15

I admit that you was right about some people moar that ML not deserve FL. But at least for this particular book this is definitely doesn't matter, especially because of origin of FL. I absolutely disagree with sentence about no romance or Yuri romance only just because main female protagonist could never be overpowered by any of male character just because who she is. There are tons other way to create relationships between people other then being stronger then partner.so For those who always whining about, so you know, whiners gonna whine.

Duckfero:The problem is not yuri, but BxG tend to have the ML superior to the FL and somehow protect/save her, and it just feel wrong when the FL is OP. If the author make the ML strong, the OP FL would become a "lady in distress" , but if they make the ML weak, readers will say he doesn't deserve her. So I think the best solution for OP FL is no romance at all, or yuri.
Kylomu
KylomuLv2

Alphas pride! that's it.

rena_ok:I don't know why is yuri so important to you, I think story itself is more important then yuri or harem or Nan Tian.
thedevilkid
thedevilkidLv4

it would have been perfectly fine if that someone wasnt her previous stalker or a complete clichè ml.

hydraspare: So if I understood, she starts to rely on someone?
Demiwizard202
Demiwizard202Lv4

I think it’s more of over reliance. There is a part of the story where she encounters the watcher and he leave a deep fear in her, which is fine. The OP FL getting trashed, beaten and losing and developing a fear of the watcher is a good way to start and add some character development. But Shiro is so terrified that she can hardly do anything with the ML being there. Always being in physical contact with him and will suffer a panic attack if he’s not there. She develops a fear that the watcher will come back and take everyone she loves away from her. But why only get a panic attack with the ML and not literally any of your other close friends and family. Her parents, her best friends, her children. Why is it only the ML that she has the be in physical contact with to not suffer her panic attacks This is what I believe when it says she gets OVER reliant with the ML

hydraspare: So if I understood, she starts to rely on someone?
Zero_8X
Zero_8XLv1

Merda... eu não vou ver isso mano parece muitooo forçado eu já passei dos capítulos 400+ ou sei lá nem lembro direito mas isso parece forçado pq ela tem todo mundo com ela e o autor fica forçado esse relacionamento deles que ele tem que ficar perto dela... porra ela conhece tantas gente sem falar da família dela poxa assim não... isso tudo pra depois ser mais natural pra os dois ficarem juntos

Demiwizard202:I think it’s more of over reliance. There is a part of the story where she encounters the watcher and he leave a deep fear in her, which is fine. The OP FL getting trashed, beaten and losing and developing a fear of the watcher is a good way to start and add some character development. But Shiro is so terrified that she can hardly do anything with the ML being there. Always being in physical contact with him and will suffer a panic attack if he’s not there. She develops a fear that the watcher will come back and take everyone she loves away from her. But why only get a panic attack with the ML and not literally any of your other close friends and family. Her parents, her best friends, her children. Why is it only the ML that she has the be in physical contact with to not suffer her panic attacks This is what I believe when it says she gets OVER reliant with the ML
Stanky_5187
Stanky_5187Lv2

how weird would it be for Shiro to end up with the daughter of her best friend? the age difference is just too much, Shiro is like 300 and Lyrica is like not even 20

Stanky_5187
Stanky_5187Lv2

also what are you talking about? shiro needed help getting saved or whatever, the most saving she needed was when Nan tian called some high level healers from his sect to heal her after she activatedall her berserker skills. that's it. there's no damsel in distress here, Shiro is meant to become the strongest in the series

Stanky_5187
Stanky_5187Lv2

are we reading the same series? Shiro never has to rely anyone. I'm at most recent chapter and up until then, she has no need to rely on anyone. literally she doms Nan tian

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

who tf cares about their age :D It was yuri bait the whole way and then switch, is the problem. If it wasn't yuri bait I wouldn't care about nan tian.

Stanky_5187:how weird would it be for Shiro to end up with the daughter of her best friend? the age difference is just too much, Shiro is like 300 and Lyrica is like not even 20
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

after early parts, whenever nan tian was there, he was always saving MC one way or another. don't be on so much copium. You could also include early parts if you consider him not killing her cuz she is a monster "saving her" too.

Stanky_5187:also what are you talking about? shiro needed help getting saved or whatever, the most saving she needed was when Nan tian called some high level healers from his sect to heal her after she activatedall her berserker skills. that's it. there's no damsel in distress here, Shiro is meant to become the strongest in the series
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

u are on copium

Stanky_5187:are we reading the same series? Shiro never has to rely anyone. I'm at most recent chapter and up until then, she has no need to rely on anyone. literally she doms Nan tian
DaoistXSX510
DaoistXSX510Lv1

FYI Shiro gets with Lyrica (ch 1234) and not with Nan Tian (ch 1246). The development was honestly really disappointing because Lyrica went MIA and the second she’s back, they’re together.

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Ty. I would read it if this didn't happen as lamely as you say it did, also it ends 40 chapters after they get together?:D Yeah, not gonna waste my time reading it. But thanks a lot of the info, I might read it if im dead bored.

DaoistXSX510:FYI Shiro gets with Lyrica (ch 1234) and not with Nan Tian (ch 1246). The development was honestly really disappointing because Lyrica went MIA and the second she’s back, they’re together.
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Curse you, why did u make me try reread this. Should have said how much more of an invalid she becomes, it's unreal. I thought The first wheelchair was bad, but it was just THE FIRST, it just gets worse and worse. Disgusting.

DaoistXSX510:FYI Shiro gets with Lyrica (ch 1234) and not with Nan Tian (ch 1246). The development was honestly really disappointing because Lyrica went MIA and the second she’s back, they’re together.
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Spoiler. So, because of some comments I found out she ends up with Lyrica, and let me tell you something, it was so garbage. On so many levels. I reread everything and after a while I actually didn't mind her ending up with Nan tian because author completely remove lyrica from the story, and it was Nantian helping with EVERYTHING only for them to be separated in some BS time/alternative universe travel bs etc etc, and shiro got together with Lyrica because she was the one who asked Shiro out FIRST! YES, MC literally said that she only chose her because Lyrica asked first. I swear, it was such a waste of time, the quality and story went downhill completely, even if we ignore the "ROMANCEEEEEEE" i can't even type it properly because of just how fkd up it was. and the story? god it got so bad.

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Clain_RiveeLv1

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