Multiverse of Marvel

Deserve the stars✨ I've been reading up to 180+ (plus more on his patr**n) and it's entertaining. Grammar is not a problem, story development is awesome. It's a wish kind of story but the author put them well. Character design and world background is on point with my understanding as a casual yet marvel's movie enthusiast. Update stability is straight compliment and magnificent. Thumbs up for your efforts to maintain the quality vs quantity. You fellow readers should give this a try. 10 Chaps should be enough, but I warn you it wouldn't.

Awesome, can see clearly that author uses his brain unlike most others in this platform. One of the best, if not the best Marvel ff. People who say mc is pitifully weak and stop reading are missing out, tho even with Fate's power mc can be invincible but that is excusable as he has strong allies. So overall author is one of the best and the ff is great.

The mc is turning out to be completely useless . This is basically a crossover with the mc acting as a bridge. There is no need to add more characters to marvel. It's not an isekai story. The MC is weak and superficial . He brings nothing to the story and has no character development except for introducing stories and characters .

Hello all. This is my first novel. It was never my intention to write but reading so many fan fictions and getting disappointed every time kind of hurt me. So finally I took the courage and started writing this novel. I have high hopes that most people will find it good. But I understand that I wouldn't be able to make everyone happy. I would really appreciate any constructive criticisms and suggestions. And don't worry I don't have any plans of dropping it. I have tons of chapters planned out that will last for a long time. Thank you for your support. Really appreciate the love. Oh yes! Mandatory 5 stars to myself. Peace

i dont know how people give so high rate to this! every chapter has so many plot holes and a lot of things have zero logic! .. .. .... .. ..

So far it's pretty good, hopefully MC won't run off to Kamar-Taj now and ruin this perfectly good story. I look forward to how the plot develops, especially how the author will merge a new world into Marvel without them clashing and creating plot holes. If it's something like Naruto, then it is doable. There are already so many dimensions in Marvel, the Naruto world can be just another one.

The reason my rating is so low is because of his powers. His power is to basically bring a world with its people to the marvel dimension. Thought the idea is good, it is too strong without any balance or a way to counter it, meaning as soon as he reaches enough "points" he becomes unbeatable depending on what world he brings first. The way to fix this would be to instead just bring the powers of these characters for a limited time. For example, instead of bringing the whole one-punch man world, some powers of Saitama will be brought to the mc for a limited time. And I mean just his powers, dont transform into saitama, dont bring his world to this universe. Nothing like that. The reason why I say this is because "spoiler alert" when you brought the naruto world into this fanfic, you basically became way more powerful than any character on earth. Naruto or sasuke alone could destroy cities very easily. If this was your plan all along, to have an unbeatable mc in the first 5 chapters, you did well. But I can find this kind of idea in other places as well. Meaning its very mediocre.

As a newbie author with protentional to learn, I will give you straight 5 stars. Just couple of suggestions. 1. Don't make MC too OP. Believe me, it would be good at first but it will become hard to connect the MC to storyline. 2. It would be better if he could only summon the power and not characters. Letting your summon do the work may sound good at first but it disconnects MC with story.

The story is the same as a chinese Marvel fanfic, everything the system, the powers, the background of the MC being Jameson's son and having Valentina as the maid is copied. You should have given credits to the original author.