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Night132
Night132Lv23yr
2021-12-10 03:32

The reason my rating is so low is because of his powers. His power is to basically bring a world with its people to the marvel dimension. Thought the idea is good, it is too strong without any balance or a way to counter it, meaning as soon as he reaches enough "points" he becomes unbeatable depending on what world he brings first. The way to fix this would be to instead just bring the powers of these characters for a limited time. For example, instead of bringing the whole one-punch man world, some powers of Saitama will be brought to the mc for a limited time. And I mean just his powers, dont transform into saitama, dont bring his world to this universe. Nothing like that. The reason why I say this is because "spoiler alert" when you brought the naruto world into this fanfic, you basically became way more powerful than any character on earth. Naruto or sasuke alone could destroy cities very easily. If this was your plan all along, to have an unbeatable mc in the first 5 chapters, you did well. But I can find this kind of idea in other places as well. Meaning its very mediocre.

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thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

I know. And yes that was my plan. But this power isn't still powerful in front of infinity gloves. Don't you think so? Having a power and using it is different. I can understand if you don't like OP MC and that is fine 😊😊

thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

And about bring powers of anime.. I have read enough of that in many fan fictions. Got tired of it so tried implementing a new setting

Night132
Night132Lv2

I am guessing since MC's goal is to be a hero, he'll at least have 2 infinity stone on earth, the space one and mind stone. So if thanos comes, of course mc wont give him the stones and be like, "oh i am so weak". He'll defend the stones no? So that makes it at at least 3 stones for thanos and 2 for mc. With that, if he guards it well, MC is way overpowered. But if we are talking all 5 in the hands of thanos, yea, of course even then, mc is not powerful yet.

thelightedghost:I know. And yes that was my plan. But this power isn't still powerful in front of infinity gloves. Don't you think so? Having a power and using it is different. I can understand if you don't like OP MC and that is fine 😊😊
thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

Who said MC will guard the stupid infinity stones? The real power is beyond the stones 😏

Night132:I am guessing since MC's goal is to be a hero, he'll at least have 2 infinity stone on earth, the space one and mind stone. So if thanos comes, of course mc wont give him the stones and be like, "oh i am so weak". He'll defend the stones no? So that makes it at at least 3 stones for thanos and 2 for mc. With that, if he guards it well, MC is way overpowered. But if we are talking all 5 in the hands of thanos, yea, of course even then, mc is not powerful yet.
sir_wolenstien
sir_wolenstienLv1

what? I actually haven't read this novel yet just going through the comments first to see the general consensus before I decide whether to read or not but what do you mean the real power is behind the stones? you do know in the MCU the stones are the physical representation of an aspect of the universe right? for example the time stone, it's not just a rock that's tied to time, IT IS TIME, and when you wield the time stone you control time all possible pasts present and futures are yours to mold to your whims....

thelightedghost:Who said MC will guard the stupid infinity stones? The real power is beyond the stones 😏
thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

But marvel has more powerful things than the stones 😊😊

sir_wolenstien:what? I actually haven't read this novel yet just going through the comments first to see the general consensus before I decide whether to read or not but what do you mean the real power is behind the stones? you do know in the MCU the stones are the physical representation of an aspect of the universe right? for example the time stone, it's not just a rock that's tied to time, IT IS TIME, and when you wield the time stone you control time all possible pasts present and futures are yours to mold to your whims....
sir_wolenstien
sir_wolenstienLv1

you right it does... in the comics, in MCU there pretty much at the top.... now if this is a comic based fanfic the stones probably aren't close to the top 50 in power levels butttttt in that top 50 only like maybe 5 characters are even decent moral wise, the vast majority would eat your planet for a snack or enlave a race to make them kill each other for entertainment

thelightedghost:But marvel has more powerful things than the stones 😊😊
thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

Yes and they are here 🙂🙂

sir_wolenstien:you right it does... in the comics, in MCU there pretty much at the top.... now if this is a comic based fanfic the stones probably aren't close to the top 50 in power levels butttttt in that top 50 only like maybe 5 characters are even decent moral wise, the vast majority would eat your planet for a snack or enlave a race to make them kill each other for entertainment
sir_wolenstien
sir_wolenstienLv1

thelightedghost:Yes and they are here 🙂🙂
SupremeMonarchAqua
SupremeMonarchAquaLv4

Like?

thelightedghost:But marvel has more powerful things than the stones 😊😊
thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

The gods.. The eternals.. Oaa.. Beyonders

SupremeMonarchAqua:Like?
ananide
ananideLv14

🤫

thelightedghost:The gods.. The eternals.. Oaa.. Beyonders
Arthur_Souza
Arthur_SouzaLv4

Who is the love interest and how long until the relationship starts? Please answer me author-sama

Arthur_Souza
Arthur_SouzaLv4

Who is the love interest and how long until the relationship starts? Please answer me author-sama

thelightedghost:And about bring powers of anime.. I have read enough of that in many fan fictions. Got tired of it so tried implementing a new setting
thelightedghost
thelightedghostAuthor

This isn't romance centric novel. There is a love interest but it's very minimal and doesn't have any effect on the story. And the love interest is Emma Watson. (no not Hermione granzer, the actual actress Emma ) but she won't be around for too long.

Arthur_Souza:Who is the love interest and how long until the relationship starts? Please answer me author-sama
Auspicious_69
Auspicious_69Lv3

its nice to hear that. please dont focus on romance, or you can just avoid putting it hehe

thelightedghost:This isn't romance centric novel. There is a love interest but it's very minimal and doesn't have any effect on the story. And the love interest is Emma Watson. (no not Hermione granzer, the actual actress Emma ) but she won't be around for too long.
Sooooyaaaaa
SooooyaaaaaLv4

He can just get Saiki's power from Saiki K then can literally stop Thanos from killing Vision and getting the mind stone. and if he removes Saiki's limiter, his mere presence alone would destroy an planet with his tremendous psychic power😂

thelightedghost:I know. And yes that was my plan. But this power isn't still powerful in front of infinity gloves. Don't you think so? Having a power and using it is different. I can understand if you don't like OP MC and that is fine 😊😊
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