Taimur_Ali

weird. dude just finished hacking and shit to get a name and someone brings it up the next morning... no context and no story. i will read for another chapter but this shit is boring..

wjy floating bolders and shit. he can directly fly.

the quality is getting worse.. why tell logan and victor about her being zeus daughter... he also only said the weapon is in diana's hands not that she was the weapon but victor and logan just know. carlos is the biggest issue i have with this.. why not just leave her name alone.. and why keep callin her by her new last name.. carlos really?... he didnt get any talents from logan and victor... and beat them up unnessarily.. before even talking to them... webnovel not letting me comment on paragraphs or else there are alot more inconsistensies

how do they know he is a mutant... is this the influence of that alien virus, that makes them hate mutants on sight..?

i thought it was umplied that gedo mezu and hashirama cells fixed and then advanced his eyes. plus i think there is a chance that eternal mangekyou recover even from using izanagi and izanami. they are eternal afterall.

but jeans main power is her telekenisis? her op telekenesis that lets her rearrange matter

plus, he keeps asking for money without explanation, someone jas to put 2 and 2 together.

Darwin Award

both chicken and beef are much healthier than ham...

Is this the same auyhor from fanfiction.net or someone copying their work...? if same author then great job. keep it up. if not, then shame on you. seriously man, just write your oen shit.