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Mind and Magic

作者: 3737_irinol
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Harry Potter, the boy who lived. How much do we know about him? About his life? About magic and the magical world? So let's find out what this magical world and its inhabitants are like. Let's watch a new person with sound logic in this crazy world. Will he stay the same? Or will he become just as crazy? Wait and see. it is a translation.!

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Aaden_
Aaden_Lv3Aaden_

Tbh, the world building is pretty good, but the progression is slowed down by the excessive explaining and details. Not to mention that its really hard to tell whether im reading thoughts, or someone talking.

Explorer121
Explorer121Lv15Explorer121

Great story, creative author, awesome world-building.

Chaos1
Chaos1Lv14Chaos1

really great story onlything holding you back is the gramer. some points of the story are just unreadable. please get some form of editing

SilverFox02
SilverFox02Lv3SilverFox02

It is a great fanfiction, actually it could be the best I read about HP. Especially the charachters and the world building are top notch and reallly fun to read. Thank you for the great story author!

_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1_DEKIM_

Meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

kinshi
kinshiLv6kinshi

great story. i really like this kind of approach. hope to see the main character dive deep into the school(talents) end develop some unique spells.

Korkyros
KorkyrosLv1Korkyros

劇透

AHighLevelLifeform
AHighLevelLifeformLv13AHighLevelLifeform

Greet fanfic!

abc_logan
abc_loganLv14abc_logan

too much nonsense and so much translation mistakes

BarryBoneRaiser
BarryBoneRaiserLv3BarryBoneRaiser

The grammar is abysmal and random unnecessary words are added. The names of places and characters are completely butchered and keep changing throughout the story, an example would be hogwarts, which alternates between hog, hoag, hogs and hogwarts. ‘It’ is commonly replaced with ‘she’ and the perspective keeps changing for no real reason. The only thing I enjoyed was the start where it was actually interesting.

Wind_1999
Wind_1999Lv13Wind_1999

One of the best if not THE best Harry Potter story I have ever read. Great world building, greate characters………………….. The grammar needs some work, contain too much unnecessary info but, Still one of the grates read in Harry Potter gonra [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LastGod
LastGodLv4LastGod

Too many words to say something very simple badically this is a 100 chapter novel wanting to be a 1000 chapter novel.

Race123
Race123Lv5Race123

It is very difficult to read and feels like I am reading a huge monologue.world building is fine but story progresses very slowly.,...................... ................. ..................................... ...

poison_testerrrrr2
poison_testerrrrr2Lv4poison_testerrrrr2

The story has potential. But the writing (translation if tl) is really bad. The author/tl clearly does not understand when to use pronoun it/his/her. It's all mush up. Next one is the naming did the author/tl did not even try to fix it. Another thing is there are paragraphs that just the author thought he/she can try to be more mysterious but did not really able to work on. It will work if the grammar is okay but it's not. I really like the plot here but after dozens of chapters it doesn't even get fixed.

Sacul_8234
Sacul_8234Lv1Sacul_8234

Interesting story, bad translation. The translator is not even trying to correct mistakes and mispronounced names. There are so many helpful programms that could increase the quality but none are used.

kingGenovaGodfrey
kingGenovaGodfreyLv13kingGenovaGodfrey

it needs more refining it's good but it just need more refining

Dragons1112
Dragons1112Lv4Dragons1112

hard to read but good story . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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