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LastGod
LastGodLv59mth
2024-07-02 09:17

Too many words to say something very simple badically this is a 100 chapter novel wanting to be a 1000 chapter novel.

Mind and Magic

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3.8
155 Chs

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Aaden_
Aaden_Lv3

Tbh, the world building is pretty good, but the progression is slowed down by the excessive explaining and details. Not to mention that its really hard to tell whether im reading thoughts, or someone talking.

1yr

Explorer121
Explorer121Lv15

Great story, creative author, awesome world-building.

1yr
Chaos1
Chaos1Lv14

really great story onlything holding you back is the gramer. some points of the story are just unreadable. please get some form of editing

11mth
SilverFox02
SilverFox02Lv3

It is a great fanfiction, actually it could be the best I read about HP. Especially the charachters and the world building are top notch and reallly fun to read. Thank you for the great story author!

1yr
BarryBoneRaiser
BarryBoneRaiserLv4

The grammar is abysmal and random unnecessary words are added. The names of places and characters are completely butchered and keep changing throughout the story, an example would be hogwarts, which alternates between hog, hoag, hogs and hogwarts. ‘It’ is commonly replaced with ‘she’ and the perspective keeps changing for no real reason. The only thing I enjoyed was the start where it was actually interesting.

8mth
_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1

Meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

1yr
kinshi
kinshiLv6

great story. i really like this kind of approach. hope to see the main character dive deep into the school(talents) end develop some unique spells.

1yr
Korkyros
KorkyrosLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
AHighLevelLifeform
AHighLevelLifeformLv13

Greet fanfic!

1yr
abc_logan
abc_loganLv14

too much nonsense and so much translation mistakes

8mth
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