Gaara

Shameless Author here. I know you're disappointed about me dropping my last book, but I assure you this one's worth it. All in all, this is my second attempt at writing something and I have high hopes for it. Hope you enjoy!

Mad respect to the author. I love this fiction. Here are my reasons to love this book: 1. Although mc has a system, it only provides him with jutsus(Not some childish boring bs like bloodlines, albilities from other animes etc. ) 2. The author respects and appreciates hard work considering how mc growth is one step at a time and gradual as opposed to "Oh I shall join anbu at 6 years old and conquer all beauties !!!!!" Bullsh@t. 3. Author cares fir character development. T

Toxin I love you bruh but this, this is not it chief, first your underestimating Gaara's strength in canon, like In cannon he was able to take hits directly from Lee in fourth/fifth gate if only for a short amount of time, and in canon he didn't train with a taijutsu prodigy, also his chakra, should be so so much higher the facts are that jinchuriki all have ridiculous amounts of chakra, he should not only have Low jonin rank chakra levels, also all his stats in canon for chunin exams were Mid chunin+ Otherwise how else would you expect him to take over the Kate position essentially just afterwards, not only that but in canon he never went to the academy and was in fact a genin for a few years before the chunin exams, your character said he didn't want to graduate early because it would screw up the timeline, well news flash he already did in multiple places, like it seems that you couldn't come up with ideas for missions so you just had him stay in the academy for the purpose of you knowing that the academy's are supposed to be boring, also even with shukaku we've seen Tailed Beasts come to respect or even bond with their jinchuriki the fact that shukaku still wants to take him over makes no sense, it really seems that you didn't know where to take this book after chapter one are just winging it until the chunin exams where you're gonna have essentially the same thing happen, even though it really shouldn't as canon gaara would bend over this one and roughly f*** him from behind when it comes to their difference in power, also, the apparently best thing about his novel according to your reviews, your system. I am something who would call themselves a system lover but the reason I love systems is the reason I hate yours, the normal "problem'" with systems is that the allow people to buy bloodlines and the like, I'd argue the main problem with systems is that the author makes a deus ex machina so that no matter what the mc gets that bloodline just in the nick of time or something similar, I see no problem with op things in the store as long as the author doesn't do something to immediately give it to them, a good example of this is within the "Anime power/world System" on this website it goes about the op system in a good way I personally think, now onto another point with the system the exp and the boost to power it's meant to give which I'd argue in this novel does the exact opposite I've already talked about how underpowered compared to the canon Gaara but also the eight year timeskip, within all that time were supposed to expect the mc just go about his daily cycle with out trying to get more powerful through other means, that's than a bit stupid if you ask me, for example in "limitless eternity" a fate fanfic with an oc and with the gamer system, the mc in that goes around destroy ant super colonies gaining loads of xp from it, the reason? Because there were loads of op people he would have to meet but couldn't beat currently. Similar to our main character, tell me if you knew that op beings like Juubito, sage of six paths madara and KAGUYA were to come back/become a thing surely you'd train your fucking ass of trying any cheaty way to get more powerful so that when those beings do arrive you're more than capable to deal with them. Tldr; The authors being stupid about the mcs power and his motivations to do certain things, also making other characters have no character development even though they should just to make it less complicated for him, in conclusion just read uchihas tale it's much better than this.

This is the first Naruto fanfic that is not Konoha centered as far as I know. So I'm really looking forward to it. and I hope this novel won't be dropped too. :)

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please don't drop this story, easily becoming one of the stories i prioritize to read😭 but also remeber to not push yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't really like writing reviews. I'm not very good at abruptly expressing myself, and wish to conclude this briefly. // This is probably the first, or maybe the second story, that is getting a 4.6(the highest I've ever given) out of 5 rating on this platform. Am an old reader of yours. Never really commented on your previous story as well, but here I am. Great work so far. Grammatically, you're brilliant. Love the glib writing if yours. Appreciate the hard work(and passion) you've been investing here. Good luck. Keep it up. Adios! *(**: Don't leave this one out hanging, please. I know it's a LOT of work and this one is surely going to be a very long fanfic, but bear with it. We, the readers, appreciate you and acknowledge your work.)*

This novel seems extremely promising considering how good your other one is:) although the other one is one of my favorite fanfics on this website i believe you should continue this one even if it doesn't pick up as much traction:) i think it was worth it to basically restart but it gives you the chance to create an even better novel (don't screw it up)(no pressure though)i hope you have a wonderful time writing this new novel:)

劇透

I have high hopes that this novel will be a great novel just like the other you wrote just hope you don't drop it like the last one and keep up the great work.

It’s good but there are just way to many times where the MC seems that he is smart but shows that he isn’t. And he has a system and the system makes him buy jutsus but later it seems he just asks the system for something and he gets it. Also somehow he is beyond strong but is also really weak sooo my end review is that is was just okay

Okayish fanfic. There's a system. Thankfully it wasn't op (as u couldn't buy bloodlines or autolearn jutsus). MC is smart enough to not mess with the timeline a lot. Also uses his Earth knowledge rather effectively. Shukaku is handled very well. Negatives : 1) System's fuinjutsu is too op. 2) No one forces MC to reveal how he got so much information. 3) Some canon scenes are forced despite the changes MC did. Like there was no reason for 3rd Hokage to die. 4) MC suddenly becomes a researcher post Chunnin exams. And pretty much makes all other researchers (like Orochimaru) appear like school kids. 5) Post that he gets sudden ambition to rule the world.

Being honest I didn’t think this novel would be this good, different from your usual fanfic you don’t have and mc with an omnipotent system that makes him the strongest existence in the world in a few years instead it just provide the information and mc needs to learn to use it properly, now I think author should have put more emphasis on the mc trying to get the recognition of his elders instead of playing the low key card since his goal is to be kazekage and by doing so he would’ve more resource while grown up, and being honest I doubt they would think he was too much of a monster when there are itachis in that world, he could have made him seem like a genius since childhood and that way they would at least consider some of the things he say and that way introduce reforms so the people doesn’t starve to death, my only let down was when he arrived at konoha and wet his pants while seeing naruto, but it was just one character and I think the author realized it doesn’t fit the image we had of the mc, overall I can say it is one of the best naruto fics I have seen so far, the idea of the mc being gaara instead of naruto or sasuke and having an actual goal and using his brain instead of just becoming a sidekick is great I just hope the author could keep with his great work and make the novel even better

Actually this story was created by God, Toxin just spelled it. Na verdade esta história foi criada por deus, Toxin apenas grafou por ele. Ajsksjssosbodbdsoshsisbsiowjwoxdnspebspsnspenco

I hope the other doesn't give up halfway I should not use about ready this and was going to give it up halfway just drop it now cuz I don't want to waste my time

I like it it updates regularly and it is a interesting and engaging novel that I enjoy. ............................................................

Definitely worth reafing so far. Good work T0XIN.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

劇透

劇透

A real shame the author stopped updating this fanfiction. Honestly this is one of the better Naruto fanfiction have read so far, and by chapter 90 we can already smell the end so I really can't understand why the author didn't finish it already...