This is the first Naruto fanfic that is not Konoha centered as far as I know. So I'm really looking forward to it. and I hope this novel won't be dropped too. :)
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Well, I’m glad you like the premise! Thanks for your support!
There are others mostly dealing with the Mist village but they aren't that good.
Yep same here looking forward to reading this
There was an excessively violent and ****ty one named elder scrolls naruto, that wasn't centred around Konoha. Not recommended for a sane/empathic person to read. It wasn’t just not my cup of tea, it was something worth hating coz I still remember it.
Why it was good you hate it because it does not have a system and the mc is a reasonable man who acts like a true mc deciding for himself and do things on his own decisions not by the system or someone else ots fairy realistic i think this why you hate it you were grown tored of konoja cwntred but the dgree of realostic things in it turned you off i agree that it loat sonewhat of it charm during the end but that was because the author didnt have any other ideas to contonue thats why the quality dropped severly this is what I remember maybe what you read is different than mine
Well, it was clearly written, that mc there is a sycho. I'm not sure about you, but I can't associate myself with a deranged maniac. And I'm not saying : "Save them all! Do only righteous things!" I'm just not a fan of:"Oh, they'll die anyway, why not killing the whole village myself/torturing them the cruellest way possible." And at the same time he 'cares' about his 'close ones'. If something like that gives you pleasure, please report to the nearest mental hospital :)
And let's not forget about self-loving d"ck for an author that can't hear critical opinions and react like a grown-up. But who am I telling it? %) It seems that everyone who was there till the end has a loose screw as well:) And this is only on paper... Have you ever tried killing something bigger than a bug/toad for fun? I assure you, if you still have a shred of empathy it'll be hard as f"ck. And here you, home boy, say that killing is easy and fun... Prove me wrong.
Dude this is just a novel the author can do whatever he wants with it as for your other ideas I'm not mentally instable to know or experience some of this things you say I suggest you visit the nearest mental institution and beware of what you comment some people are not as polite as I'm when you start calling them loose screws they will trash you in the comments boy
You're a long way from home yuppie boy. And you still haven't proven your point of view, nor defeted mine. Defend that sh't of a novel, I'm waiting. Mr. Polite Guy, I'm looking for trashing, please do, if you have the balls. Of course, at least with proofs and so on,coz you'll definitely win at cursing(as you have nothing more) :)
What can you do mister all powerful you can just brag about yourself but please do I always enjoy someone embarrassing himself yuppie boy and mind if you do remember it all or your just one of this people who just read two chapters and start bashing it but I'm sure your gonna say you were the first one to read it so I digress but the author clearly stated that he will make it logical to his most ability and I don't see a fault for his actions considering he just died find out that his father left him for a dying clan raised alone by his mother saw her experience trashy life without him being abale to hel p and even being a burden and lives in a civil war torned country for decades considering this I can understand if he experienced a few sociopathic tendencies after all if they just gonna die a meaninglydeath for a manipulated country then why not just use them for his own plans your being very subjective of your point of view if he was living in konoha or other villages I can understand your opinion since almost all of the are in peace besides kiri but he is raised in in war he needs to do what he needs to do so he can survive with his lovedones
As for your so condescending tone I don't lower myself to your level as either you or me can only trash and curse each other so what isay inst different from what you say big boy
There is loads of fanfic not based on konoha on fanfiction.net
Like how you write keep the work!
I didn't read it yet but when i saw no harem i felt like crying this is the first time i saw someone write a book it naruto wolrd with out a harem. So thank you for that
Yes it's a good fanfic and hope that it will not be dropped
Yes it's a good fanfic and hope that it will not be dropped
Yes it's a good fanfic and hope that it will not be dropped
Yes it's a good fanfic and hope that it will not be dropped
Yes it's a good fanfic and hope that it will not be dropped
Yes it's a good fanfic and hope that it will not be dropped
