Frieren: The Dark Mage's Diary

Welcome to my new novel, set a thousand years before the death of the Demon King. I read a novel that came out before this one, I don't know how you take this new novel but if you like the rhythm the chapters will go by quickly.

so a thousand years before the canon huh? Guess we won't be meeting Fern or Stark... but if we get to meet Flamme, Serie and of course Frieren! keep cooking author! I'll give my everyday power stones if you make Frieren the love interest!

Good novel so far, but not for all readers. According to the guide chapter, the first 20 chapters are introductory, which means that for the following ones you will see a more adult version. The protagonist's reaction to the unknown, the dangers and how to take care of himself is the closest thing to realism. Good novel, as said, not for everyone.

the fic have plot holes like how mc have the invisible book to help him but not clear reason how is that possible. and the book got ability to read future with no clear lore how is that possible. its logically flawed which is fatal for frieren fandom becauss frieren lore is one off the most consistent lore with working logic and balance fairness in distribution of power/talent. mc also know that there is water which gives you longevity in life without proper lore and reason. author is just sugar daddy for mc who keep giving mc power and plot armor, its wish fulfillment. reading this fic is just like reading cultivation novel in frieren complete with stereotype villain like bully sectmate and bully senior with one dimensional character, completely different from frieren's vibe which have complex characters. in frieren fic, even demon who have simplest nature is more complex characters than what this fic is offer. grammar and language writing quality is good. update is stable. world background and lore is bad becauss its like chinese cultivation world. character design is flawed. but despite all those flaws, this fic is still the best frieren fic around. tbh there is no frieren which have less flaw ornplothole than thia fic. so yeah its my favorite frieren fic rn. i'll temper my expectation to this fic at moderate level knowing that frieren is mostly abandomed in less than 30 chaptechapter

Are there any holes in the plot regarding the protagonist's motivations? Yes, but I give it the benefit of the doubt. I warn you in advance that I expect a twist and conspiracy that makes me scream "WONDERFUL!"

Ok, as I say this, this novel at the beginning was incredible and in the middle part it was great, but in the last chapters it was total garbage, 1. the mc completely changed his personality, from a war general to a poorly made copy of Ban (7 deadly sins), 2. the mc flees and avoids the war even though too many characters sacrificed themselves because they thought he would fight the demon king and the only thing the mc did was hide for years, 3. the author copied and pasted Ban's backstory with the fairy, his romance with the fairy and the cup of immortality, it's not hate, just my opinion as someone who follows this every update :9

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Who is romance? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Perfect. Better than 99% of ffs. The story development is great. MC backstory is good. Well written author.🔥🔥🔥..................................

I love where the book is going and that it's a 1000 years in the past i'm hoping you keep doing more chapters. -------------------------------------------------

劇透

As I understand it, this is a crossover between Friren and The Seven Deadly Sins. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Solo debo decir pinche historia buena, que siento muy cortos los capítulos que actualiza el creador, 9.5/10 porque me deja con ganas de más. 🧐😏

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Good story, but a lot of things don't really make sense like for an example mc is supposed to be reincarnated adult but behaves like a kid and for whatever reason he hates demon on Frieren's level even though they technically haven't done anything to him before he joined the war

Me gusta tu historia porfavor continua con ella para que todos puedan disfrutar de esta historia 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Review as of Chapter 11(might change it later): Writing Quality: ⭐⭐⭐ Story Development: ⭐⭐ Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ There's so many plot holes and inconsistency, Author forgot what he write chapters ago. Imagine throwing away plot details just for the sake of cliche "Mc have a strong eyes, strong background, actually strong teacher and parents' friend, and connection to Flamme" Im being generous with my review, many already dropped it at this point but i will still read it for the sake of Frieren

Fue increíble la historia aunque pienso que todavía puede quedar como 3 arcos más estuvo divertido la trama. Aunque cuando terminó la historia sentí como si me hubiera chocado contra una pared

it, really was just a diary ..............

Great stuff!! I had a lot of fun reading this story!