Fantasy World: I Can Travel To Cultivation World

This is a good story keep up the good work

Je ne mais pas 5 étoiles car il n'y a pas encore assez de chapitres pour ce faire une idée globale de l'histoire Je suis au chapitre 37 pour le moment et l'histoire est super 👍

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so far so good the writing can be improved but it's really just some name flips and race changes here or there and the wrong placement of words that mess up the flow Abita but other then that the pacing is fine so far it's fun and I'm engaged would recommend

This is new and so far I like your approach to the story! MC is smart and diligent. He knows his capabilities and isnt trying to rush to face immortal cultivators. I also hope eventually you show how cultivators are way stronger then grandmaster in general. Usually immortal cultivators can use qi and mortal cultivators can not and cultivators are supposed to be a lot stronger then mortal practioners. I hope you can show why there is a difference since somehow you included that mortal practioners can use qi eventually but you can explain it that their technique allows them to gather impure qi vs pure and this makes mortal weaker then immortal cultivators

Author this is a hidden gem ! I mean you hardly find writing quality like this with smart Mc usually and I am glad I discovered I like how this mixes aura, qi and possibly mana as well in future and the business expansion, establishing commerce is awesome as well. I like how MC utilizes his family, and subordinates to grow Also the way he is establishing himself and power in the other world as well. MC so far is intelligent, uses his resources well and is pretty smart overall