MangaisLife1

Well the reasons this story isnt a 4 or higher is because 1. MC is cringe when he says stupid stuff like this I am the most handsome I am the protagonist I am the MC I am OP When mc says to multiple girls in his mind " I will make you mine etc or hinting at you will come to love me in the future" but in 200+ chapters he has done nothing when so many girls are interested 2. MC makes a group of people and force under him for fun but he has no goal or ambitions. He doesnt even take it seriously. I mean it gets tiring after 180+ chapters of his lack of properly cultivating his force If you are going to build a force do some proper work 3. Story shows barely any progress he goes to one sect gets some people under him, then goes to another sect gets some people under him...its too repetitive of the same scenarios over and over 4. MC just doesnt utilize his resources properly of how he couldve been making a proper force and no he doesnt realize this until like chapter 200+ that something is effed up with his mentality. He doesnt have his past life memories but he does know he was a really strong being in the past, and has some limited knowledge of it while most his memories are sealed. But even while knowing that his own lack of ambition is stupid. He has been portrayed as a genius, smart etc but then he does stupid things. He says he cares about his adopted family but then did he give them better techniques? since theirs are low level ? did he help the possible girls with potential (who could be part of harem), no he hasnt done any of that or provided them higher level techniques. Also typically if you form foundations with low level techniques your foundation, or power isnt as strong so makes no sense why he hasnt dont that for so many people under him etc It is just too dragged out 5. I was hoping for some romance or harem etc but all he does is think all the time that " oh that girl will come to like me" or she hasnt fallen for me now but in the future Yeah its so stupid to hear that for over 200+ chapters with no progress

Thats awesome ! Also I hope that aeon plane is just the beginning. I hope you expand this to other planes so MC can find out that aeon plane is not even the strongest plane. That there are other planes to conquer and higher cultivation realms than overlord. This way story can go on :D for more than 9999+ chapters

Thanks for saving me time....mc isnt supposed to get NTRED he is supposed to ntr others smh

MC is a beta simp idiot MC can go between modern world and ancient world So what does he do during that time but waste time He be comes a son in law He can setup his own business, use the technology, things from modern world for the old world but does he do any of that ? Nope like an idiot he is helping his in laws family business, helping them uncover embezzlement, giving them techniques that only imperial family has, etc Meanwhile his wife wasnt even sleeping in the same bed as him for like 70 chaps almost She treats it as a marriage of convenience when he has done so much already If he set up his own restaurant, his own recipes,bring general items like tooth brushes, clothes etc he could get silver or gold which he could use to buy antiques and profit ridiculously in his modern world Instead he is going around where people are treating him like a useless freeloader because they think he is relying on the family to survive when he has done so much.

Well let me tell you why story isnt for you 1. MC is supposed to be smart but saying stupid se*ual things to a goddess who can destroy him. He knows she can read his mind and he continues to fantasize. Yes you can think she needs me for something but why would you take such risks for something you cant confirm 2. Too tedious description. You write out everything which doesnt need to be written. Its too much details. Like if you say he is walking to his sisters room which she always leaves unlocked (like its so unnecessary to tell so many details like she leaves it unlocked or not..you do that a lot) 3. The descriptions for the girls are a little just too trashy.. like describing them with perky butt , big boobs etc.. feels to generic I mean there should be some subtlety

Novel is pretty amazing ! I am really surprised because usually I do not like these types of novels where there are so many time skips to show progress. It feels too fake usually but Author has surprisingly made it good. I mean the cultivation realms, laws, progress etc make sense. Its a pretty good and fun read so far. Definitely the best in time skips and where MC grows with his family and harem. Also where it shows familys progress as well making it unique.

Lord_GrimR / Author your novel is amazing but I have a question.? Since Iris has not used the Origin manual (the perfect foundation) , also she is not part of river of knowledge cant MC do something make a custom manual to make her switch to origin, and be part of river of knowledge otherwise she wont be at the same level as his families foundation...I mean since he is incorporating other rivers possibly cant he incorporate everyones river etc into his river. The reason being I dont think he would want someone to be the master of the river she is in, or is she the master of her river like he is master of river of knowledge? because whoever is the master can control how others progress . Also even if she is master the... benefit of mc giving her customized origin, and having his system auto cultivate whatever river she is master of is better since they can spend more time relaxing them cultivating all the time. Unless he can give her origin, and if she is the master of river then it would be better for her to switch to his master of knowledge. Also I know tier 11 you cant switch but he should be able to come up with a solution. Also once he upgrades system more anyone bound to him through origin etc he should be able to automatically send them casuality etc to upgrade their physique all the time. Since it was a slow process and he can generate casuality. This way constantly he is using part of the casuality to upgrade their physique and make the system auto cultivate their law etc giving them a lot of free time.

Author I was enjoying the story but then there are some problems 1. MC is an idiot. You say he is smart, can sense negative intent, or people who have bad feelings but all along the emperor, jim, rain ...these people were out to screw him over but what did he do? be cautious nope. Took a potion from someone and drank without any worries. He even sensed the emperor didnt like him so why didnt he trust his intuition 2. He has been poisoned once but he literally drank something and got roofied from a potion again. He doesnt trust Athena so why not be cautious. It just seems so stupid. You would think he would be cautious at this point but 3. I mean the way you are making his harem is so weird. I mean you give us such a wholesome happy marriage feel with Liliana and the kids ....makes you feel like he doesnt need harem then bam he gets roofed and r*ped by dragon empress. I mean thats a effed up way to introduce harem members. If he pursued them his self and took on members it would be better but like this its kind of effed up. 4. I wish you had introduced some lifespan increases with power etc. I mean since demons, dragons elves etc live so long and humans lifespan is probably a 100 at most or so. I was hoping it said he has chance to become God realm so maybe can be immortal and then help the harem members, kids etc be immortal too possibly 5. MC is annoying. I mean he said he would get revenge on emperor, the prime minister, rain etc but eventhough rain is the one who poisoned him he is probably her childhood crush. Let me guess he will forgive her when he finds out? I mean its so stupid since he really wouldve died if not for a coincidence due to her poison. He just seems like too much of a idealistic Like he didnt want to get angry at Dragon empress because he needs their support He is constantly being pushed around by people and lead around. He is stronger then her but he is scared since she tried to r*pe him. Well then if he is then why did he like an idiot send Liliana out of meeting and got roofied, kidnapped and r*ped. I mean you say all this about Mc being smart but isnt he an idiot. I mean nothing needs to be hidden from Liliana, but he sends her out. It makes no sense he makes such stupid decisions when you know the other person is crazy, tried to r*pe you in the past and what they have done in the past yet you get surprised when they do same thing again? just few words and you start getting tricked its absurd

AUTHOR Masterpiece ! But I do have a suggestion at the end I was planning to read this for a while and didnt because I thought it wouldnt be good or some useless control womens mind and make a harem but surprisingly great writing MC is ruthless, and he grows to have ambitions MC also makes mistakes but slowly Reolran helps and corrects him I mean he learns, grows and it a good journey You can see mc growing with time, getting better through fights and not becoming op day 1. I like the struggle and this reminded me on martial world cultivation novel. MC in there also fought for chances, took risks to grow, gained experience through fights Suggestion- Like Reaolran best and I agree dona/yuri are a little annoying I mean she sacrificed a lot for MC, and is a major part of why he is surviving with clowns circus, saving him from angels, training him, evoling etc Now yes Dona did help him in the start (but thats only because he used heart input on her) but she just feels like an annoying needy useless person. So she wasnt in an equals position with mc, and neither was yuri she was weaker. I feel Reolran should get some more attention because imagine giving your true name, your ability clowns circus, helping someone evolve, training etc and then having the person you do it for giving more attention to others Realoran did something for him, was sealed for hundreds of years to protect/help him etc and she is not getting enough attention. I would atleast like where others understand she is Queen of the harem. I mean she has done way more for him then others but others and him are not really giving her the due she deserves with all she has done.

If someone told AI to write a novel with poetic language then this would be it! The vivid descriptions remind you of a Shakespearean play lol