Bella_Lux_Style

AUTHOR We need more chapters ! 9999+ chapters. I like how MC is smart and intelligent instead of being stupid. I do wish you throw some good harem but where it starts developing slowly towards love. Also please stop making him be scared or beta infront of the girl at times its not cool when he gets scared etc. I mean he is the one who is managing everything so why be scared of her when he is the one who saved her from slavery....

Author I was honestly thinking this will not be good but I like the concept. You should polish the story a little more but overall its amazing. I love the two world concept....I really do hope eventually you include some nice harem and romance in the cultivation world and not empty vases. But something which he has to work towards. They cant just see him and be like omg i love you. He has to get stronger, show his capabilities, spend some time going to secret realm etc and then whoever he pursues starting from friends first start to develop feelings. Also you have to make a harem which isnt useless but also grow alongside him and help him grow his sect/businesses etc. I mean if you can show real relationships developing through hardwork and supporting each other that would be awesome