I like it, and maybe its better than most douluo dalu fanfics, but that doesnt mean that this is an amazing novel, there are a lot of mistakes, like how the MC being a reincarnated novelist is soooo stupid and almost always go with the flow.
The worst thing i could see in this fanfic is that the MC is a secondary character. This isnt a story about a MC doing things in the Douluo dalu world, this is Tang San story but read through a secondary character, a support character like rongrong, fatty or the food pervert, is just that in this case the support is a reicarnated person.
It started original, but now is always the MC following what Tang San does, a shame because i already read the original story and reading it again, albeit through the MC in his support mode, is sometimes really boring. Put more simply, is like re-reading the novel but following Xue Wu or Mubai......as they follow Tang San. The only saving grace is that sometimes the flow returns to the MC, like when he's cultivating.