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Clear Amber Hammer King: A Douluo Dalu Fanfiction

作者: ArcMeow
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A fantasy novelist dies and is reincarnated into the Douluo Continent as Tang Jin, heir of the Clear Sky School. It's a daunting legacy to live up to, but with the threat of an age old grudge, there's no choice left but to become stronger. I do not own Douluo Dalu. Story contains strong language and violence not suitable for ages 13 and below, parental guidance is advised.

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This story seems written by a professional, like a Light Novel. I really like the development and the speed of progress. I also like the fact that the protagonist is not mega Op, I do not like those fan-fic (except some very unique), instead we have a more "real" protagonist and a credible personality that makes us feel connected to the story . Now what I do not like: the decisions of the protagonists. I like him to experiment with his powers and that, but why does he count every damn thing on everyone ?. He is already big (mentally), he should be able to understand the risks of counting everything (which, to clarify, are not very normal). Even Tang San does not tell his closest friends his technical skills or teach them how to form their "Hidden Weapons" For example: What happened to the ring when it did explode, Why he told the whole story to each person who crossed if he already knew that they would not know anything? and there is also his reaction to despair, but although I do not agree with his reaction I can understand it. The other thing I do not like is that he does not have any "cards up his sleeve". It has no secret (except that reincarnate). More specifically I mean combat, Tang San always had his hammer as a secret (and a new technique always appeared) and Hao Yuhao (apart from the 1-million-year-old beasts) had even a ring of Necromancer. I mean, the original characters have a lot more cheats than Jin. I would like Jin to receive another spirit and keep it as a secret (do not tell his family). If you want a recommendation of what spirit you can consult me. After that I like it a lot. Especially interactions of the characters are very well addressed. And I like the background of Jin, you managed to insert it into the story in a very "natural" way.

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