Cracker7

At 6 years old, what do you expect? And the power of Yoei is "cut" chakra, not "nullify" or "erase". The "cut" means that he can interact with chakra like if was solid

It has potential but here are too many things that annoys me like hell. 1- The "¿System?": The System is just a voice the serves to put comments in certain moments to put a little of humour or act like as the MC psychologo. So where does MC strenght come from? From a "pact" witha god he made in chapter 5 or 6, a with that he have another voice in his head. And from hes overpowered bloodlines So the system has some information about the game [characters], or weakness of the creatures or how to grow strong? No, literally nothing. So how much did the system aport? Well, it gave the MC a basic sword at the start, and then the MC buys a Mask and thats ALL. At the start looked like it would be a "Dat sim" System, who gives choices about the heroines and "points of affection" but that function seems to have dissapear. And in a moment the system came with a new "great function" but in next chapter is forgotten. 2. The "original" villain, wich MC takes his body: He is a lustful person and everybody hates him but when he was a kid he was the biggest genius, all de heroines loved him and was a kind a handsome boy. So when the MC show his talent is like: "oh, he is back at what he was". What a bullshit. 3- There are too many plotholes 4- He loved a single women in his 1st life (and she died). When he transmigrates obviusly he miss her, and is a logic thing. And he has the original body memory (16 years old). Why Im saying this? Suddenly when the MC is thinking about love he is "oh a didnt have luck.. the only GIRLS I have loved..." And starts naming girls from the original body chilhood body when he had 7 years old. Come on men, you loved deeply, 3 girls, and when you had 7 years?

I said because the time where Akame ga kill is set is like the Medieval era, time where the church did that type of things.

Bro, deal with Esdeath because of the public opinion? Is if a non-supernatural world I would think is okay, after all the image and politic is very important. But you are in a world where 1 man-army exist, where you could blow-up entire mountains in a second with Shikouteizer, or summon the dead with a katana. Where a powerful beast could destroy an entire nation. Is a world where actual power (not the illusion of money) exist. You have the strongest human in the world in your side, who can freeze an entire land and even stop time. But you want to be her enemy because of the image of the empire? That she is violent? Man, even in our world the church just burned people alive daily and everybody still worships them.

Bro, remember that the child emperor is far from be vulnerable. And probably is the strongest if you consider just raw power. After all he has the first and "strongest" Teigu, Shikouteizer "defending machine god" Just with the the energy barrier that it creates, means that there is almost no one who can hurt him in the actual time (maybe the only exception at this point in the timeline would be Esdeath)

I think it is beacause when they often transmigrate the angry birds is already created or have similar games, like you say it was created years before Flappy bird. Another reason is that Flappy Birds is a easy game to create, its just a bird who fly when you touch the screen. While angry birds it may look simple but the mechanics to create it aren't a one person job. Plus, one of the reason why Angry birds its so succesfull are the constants actualizations with new birds, enemies and escenarios; while Flappy bird its just a bird who flaps, so no need for actualizations. Conclusion: A lot easier to do it, and no need for actualizations or complex work

Bro, its not strange at all. In fact, it would be weird if the first time is at 17, you are almost at university at that age.

Good work. I have a question: Would you ad another verses? I mean, I really enjoy the story like it is but I think that in somepoint it would turn repetitive. Modern family is good but at the same time when you have a MC like Edward who has that many high level skills and can obtain even more with his cheat, the verse would be "small".

Amazing job, and good chapter but a I found two things in this chapter that are a little weird: 1- $300 per night? Thats to crazy, the common salary per month is about $1000. 2- Dont overcharge our MC schudele, he is running hes dad bussines, he is with his music, teaching hes friend to programm and now hes going to produce a music video for someone else? Thats a new and annoying thing that not help with nothing, the amount of time it require to make and produce a video is not about 1 day, it took weeks working on it at full time

The first chapters are annoying. The Mc do things that Im sure no "reincarnator" would do. MC has no secrets, any time it happen something he tells everyone, if he achieve something he tells everyone, etc. The relations are to 'bidimensionals', it feels like are robots who says the things or like they speak twitter phrases.