Flaashii

Yeah well, why not just because they are overused should not mean that you can't use them and I think the trend of not using them has become more in recent times that I can't find many fic's with them being used as harem members... In the end it's up to you but I would not want them to be with issei or any other men xD :D

wut what no rias and no akeno wtf how can someone not have them -.- bad taste my friend bad taste xD :D

hope you finally stop with the background stories this fic till now as 10% story and 90% backstory .... it's good but really if you go like this this fic will have 1000 chapters and from the 1000 chapters 900 will be backstory.. xD [img=thinking]

Man I really can't get past the first chapter it's so badly written that I just can't I tried to give it a chance but things are happening so fast that they just don't make sense wtf man I really liked the idea but the first chapter killed every interest I had in this first some meeting about with the three factions which idk how fast happened, and then the thing with akeno then the attack then him babbling everything to her then the resurrection of akenos mother wtf man this is just the first chapter and it killed it.

God ok, we get it man, can you stop getting him to talk that much so unnatural ...always hate it when mc's talk and talk and talk like they need to explain everything in one go it's like a duty for them -.-

If you like me read till here then you know that the author loves to forget even his own plot points and everything in between even other things and I think he even forgot the NFS game? idk

Yeah, I am out too got too stupid too fast for me like him even knowing it is the pjo world but still blabbering about everything to a goddess he does not even know, could not even read the chapter to the end so bad it got for me -.-

what ways rofl ...

So if I am understanding the last part right his girls like pandora is going to get pregnant from another man ? If so I am out .

It is a good fic but you need to check the grammar because right now it reads like you just translated it and didn't think to check it.