Item: Clear Amber Hammer King: A Douluo Dalu Fanfiction
Rating: 4
Author: Yanorth

YanorthLv146yr

2018-12-22 10:25

Isn't he a writer of novel of fantasy how he don't know the basic of any fantasy? Even my mother know a lot more than the mc, don't really make sense, for me this is a fucking plothole and this chapters is really boring too, if we are reading the fabric is because we know how the world works you don't need to explain everything, more than 3 chapters of info dump

Clear Amber Hammer King: A Douluo Dalu Fanfiction

ArcMeow

4.1

43 Chs

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ZhelanderLv4

I like it, and maybe its better than most douluo dalu fanfics, but that doesnt mean that this is an amazing novel, there are a lot of mistakes, like how the MC being a reincarnated novelist is soooo stupid and almost always go with the flow. The worst thing i could see in this fanfic is that the MC is a secondary character. This isnt a story about a MC doing things in the Douluo dalu world, this is Tang San story but read through a secondary character, a support character like rongrong, fatty or the food pervert, is just that in this case the support is a reicarnated person. It started original, but now is always the MC following what Tang San does, a shame because i already read the original story and reading it again, albeit through the MC in his support mode, is sometimes really boring. Put more simply, is like re-reading the novel but following Xue Wu or Mubai......as they follow Tang San. The only saving grace is that sometimes the flow returns to the MC, like when he's cultivating.

6yr

3PoundsOfRiceLv5

My favorite DD story, what I like the most is the detail in each chapter. The only thing I do not like is that it looks as if little Jin is in the shadow of Tang San

6yr

BloodRiverDaoistLv5

this is fucking amazing the quality is so unreal I couldn't believe I was reading fanfiction this could easily pass off as the original to people. I'ts so good I read it all in one sitting all 170k+ words damn those chapters are gloriously long yum😋🤗

6yr

AoalbjornLv3

MC is weaker than Originial novel's MC. He wastes whole 5 years doing nothing just so author can match the timeline and not make MC much OP than the MC. What kinda bull**** reason is this? why must he be weaker than Tang san? Tang sans future potential is great. he can have 18 rings but Mc can only have 9 despite having two spirits. even if the future is calculated he still loses to tang san. Tang san can take three times the age of his previous spirit ring. where MC can only take two times at best. Im saying all these calculating whose future power would be greater. He wastes five whole years selling irons and things without much training. He reached 20 rank at the age of five. but it took him five more years to reach 21 rank. I know you need to build so called foundation. but I dont see any training. it was instant time skip. nothing was mentioned what happened in these five years

5yr

ReimossLv14

What can I say? This story makes me feel sad, empty, desolate. Your writing style is disgusting. The main character (if you could call him a mc) is stupid, weak and annoying. I can't continue reading this as it might make me go into a depression.

6yr

LupineKingLv12

The best douluo dalu fanfic so far and I do not use those words lightly. The author seems to where he wants the story to go as well as how to get there. He's don't a phenomenal job with respect to charade development and power balance so far. Admittedly, he is still far from the point where a stress on balance will be more necessary (HINT: It's where Tang San begins to win every power lottery and makes the rest of the shrek devil's - already acknowledged to be monsters themselves look useless by comparison.) All in all it is a great read. Very creative. A high bar as far as fanfics go and something I would really recommend to anyone and everyone even if you're not a fan of the original series. Keep it up!

6yr

GrandpaMaoLv5

Well , too be honest , just leaving my review in here since i am too lazy to write it on fanfiction and spacebattle. This story is actually somehow or other even with an insertion of unknow power system (amber crown and co) still manage to integrate it self with the canon , you can see the author actually read the story and done his research right , even to detail of many things , too detail even that make me wonder why did you even know that , or you actually just spouting nonsense that actually make sense. The development of character is good but there is many blank here and there because the time skip , however the author always do the follow up about that hole and make flashback here and there in some narration so there is actually no hole , just mounded hole lol. The mc is op but not that op , his op is still in the realm of man on man and that make this story actually can progress smoothly , the author always develop his idea well and actually response to the comment and review when the reader doesnt understand or when there is some errors in his writing. Overall , Arcmeow, i cast continue-your-hard-work-please-thank-you!!

6yr

swordzeroLv6

Read this at fanfiction.net https://***.fanfiction.net/s/12485507/1/Douluo-Dalu-Clear-Amber-Hammer-King. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .

6yr

Cracker7Lv4

This story seems written by a professional, like a Light Novel. I really like the development and the speed of progress. I also like the fact that the protagonist is not mega Op, I do not like those fan-fic (except some very unique), instead we have a more "real" protagonist and a credible personality that makes us feel connected to the story . Now what I do not like: the decisions of the protagonists. I like him to experiment with his powers and that, but why does he count every damn thing on everyone ?. He is already big (mentally), he should be able to understand the risks of counting everything (which, to clarify, are not very normal). Even Tang San does not tell his closest friends his technical skills or teach them how to form their "Hidden Weapons" For example: What happened to the ring when it did explode, Why he told the whole story to each person who crossed if he already knew that they would not know anything? and there is also his reaction to despair, but although I do not agree with his reaction I can understand it. The other thing I do not like is that he does not have any "cards up his sleeve". It has no secret (except that reincarnate). More specifically I mean combat, Tang San always had his hammer as a secret (and a new technique always appeared) and Hao Yuhao (apart from the 1-million-year-old beasts) had even a ring of Necromancer. I mean, the original characters have a lot more cheats than Jin. I would like Jin to receive another spirit and keep it as a secret (do not tell his family). If you want a recommendation of what spirit you can consult me. After that I like it a lot. Especially interactions of the characters are very well addressed. And I like the background of Jin, you managed to insert it into the story in a very "natural" way.

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