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Cleanup Department

作者: HornyBoi
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The beginning after the unknown end has transpired. Reincarnation under a forgotten contract. Bound by duties unknown to him, possessing great abilities he has no knowledge of, in this land encroached by Impurities, what does the future have in store for the one who reincarnated as Rokuro Enmado.

Chapter 1Author Time: I’m Back

I don't know what to say. I started writing fanfics when the pandemic lockdowns and was unable to continue my fanfics since my attention was divided between gacha gaming and my studies. It's been quite some time since I earnestly wrote a chapter. I even had thoughts of permanently stopping. I don't know the direction of my story and might end up as following the source material, nor do I know how to balance power scaling. I felt guilty at my incompetence to make what I wrote as interesting to the readers. There's also the issue of time management

About two years has passed, and ever since then, ideas for fanfic have been popping out non-stop. And recently, I thought that I must still have the thirst to write something.

This time, I plan to commit on this fanfic so I will make sure to take my time to write chapters that I can be satisfied with. But that will mean that I will be unable to release many chapters in a regular interval. I might not be able to reply to comments or review, so I apologize in advance. But I still look forward to your objective comments or reviews and I will read them from time to time. The story might progress slowly, so please have mercy on that account.

I want to give a short introduction for this new fanfic of mine, but I think I will just place that on the synopsis.

On a second, I can't think of a synopsis.

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Synopsis A girl from our world got reincarnated in one piece as nami. Well I am not good at writing synopsis without spoiling the story. This is my second attempt on a story on Nami. Originally I was planning to bring the OG Nami from future to the past, like I have done with Hancock. But then I realised that Nami might be intelligent, but she is not strong. Atleast compared to the other straw hats. Her main strength was her intelligence. I am talking about both physical strength and will. That's why I decided to go in the reincarnation route again. This is going to be different from my other fanfictions. I have no intention of making Nami one of the top straw hats. As you can guess from the story title, this is an one piece AU. That means a lot of thing will be different. Nami will be strong. Way stronger then canon. But not comparable to monster trio. And before you complain, let me tell you that, monster trio will be a lot stronger than the monster trio of canon as well. Now on to the points which I am going to focus in the story. Character building No system Realistic struggle of the MC (I won't make it cringy, but considering the kind of World One Piece is, there will be some realistic struggle unlike the Sigma system) R-18 (you know, Nami is Nami. I have not decided to add smut yet. But ecchi ? Definitely !) Ecchi-Comedy (this is something I am going to try for the first time. I have been experimenting with this in my Sakura fics. I will try my best to make you laugh with double meaning jokes.) Weak to strong characters OP straw hats Canon different straw hats Tragedy (A lot of tragedy is going to happen in the first part of the story. I am going to cover Nami's childhood. It will also serve as her training arc. So don't expect it to be light.) Blood and Gore I have a great story line in mind. And I am going to write it regardless of my schedules. I will try to make it better than my current favourite one piece Sigma system. I am telling this with confidence, because the story in my mind for this one, is really solid. I hope you like it. This will be available for the members of fanfiction phase1. Thank you for reading. The cover page is extremely sloppy because webnovel rejected my cover page which took me an entire hour to make. this time I didn't even left any cleavage, which should be there considering it is Nami. *sigh* if you don't like the cover page when I will remove it. ...

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Well, you don't need this review, but I do. There is 2 very big problems with this novel, that makes me a bit of mad... As a dork on powers and power-levels, I have a problem with this system. Let me ask you, if you see a 100 thousands points of strength, when an new characters have just 10 in all stats, how strong you think it is? A tricky question, enough to break a wall.... I'm not kidding,okay. Apparently, f class stats in fate takes 400.000 thousands points and would be more than 1000 levels in this system.... How the ****?! All those overpowered skills from fate in ex ratings? Just some little boosts in certain situations and little flat boost to his statistics.... I would call it a scam, but oh well. On the other hands, mc is not op and struggling a lot in fights... That he logically shouldn't. I don't know how to take it, on the one hand, I don't like when all those stats and skills seems to be a scam, on the other, op mc is a bit bland, especially when he's best talent lies in farming... Maybe, you can just rework it? So people have easier time to understand? And second and it a bit more of objective problems. Reading first chapters and synopsis, you will expect some really evil /bad mc, right? Thinking it's would be someone new, not some struggling bipolar teenagers, who afraid of relationships and afraid of how evil he is, right? Well, **** you, and **** me. That's what you get. Some weird drama, that have no sense giving his background. Some emotional weaknesses, that look like belong in other type of stories. And a lot of lovey-dovey girls, even his yandere skill seems to be a rood. Yeah it's corny, very inconsistent and generally hurt me far more, than I expected it. It's look like different ideas that looks cool in author tastes, from shounen manga fights, some from shoujo dramas, and some from weird comedies, clash together with some angsty edgy stuff, right from 90s. Conclusion, if you come reading synopsis, for some really evil mc or harem without goody two shoes mc, well it's not exactly it. It's not so bad rating still pretty high, but when I look at those two huge problems, and read author thoughts, I became kind of upset. It's really sound like, I know it's stupid, but because I I say it should be so, that means you fall in my plan! - yeah, no. You can just rework you system, at least....

Mr_SlimePB
Mr_SlimePBLv10

thanks for the fanfiction because I really like the fact that you did not write any thing like mc saving someone or mc is weak to girls like other mc where just a random girl glare at mc then he would be scared. I also like the mc's personality because he does not care whether they are girl or boy, he treats them equally true equality where he treats everything equal. I also like it when mc can stop his girls from doing harm to mc, just because they are close to mc does not mean they could or should harm the mc, it is like someone got close to you then gives them the right to hit you just them being unreasonable. I also don't really care if the mc is manipulative because it just makes it more exciting. I don't really care if there are little to no r-18 because it doesn't really matter for me but could you, author, make a line where or if they have s*x just write like after they had s*x or just like time skip it really is ok. overall the fanfic is great for me.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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