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HornyBoi
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2021-03-01 18:54

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Well, you don't need this review, but I do. There is 2 very big problems with this novel, that makes me a bit of mad... As a dork on powers and power-levels, I have a problem with this system. Let me ask you, if you see a 100 thousands points of strength, when an new characters have just 10 in all stats, how strong you think it is? A tricky question, enough to break a wall.... I'm not kidding,okay. Apparently, f class stats in fate takes 400.000 thousands points and would be more than 1000 levels in this system.... How the ****?! All those overpowered skills from fate in ex ratings? Just some little boosts in certain situations and little flat boost to his statistics.... I would call it a scam, but oh well. On the other hands, mc is not op and struggling a lot in fights... That he logically shouldn't. I don't know how to take it, on the one hand, I don't like when all those stats and skills seems to be a scam, on the other, op mc is a bit bland, especially when he's best talent lies in farming... Maybe, you can just rework it? So people have easier time to understand? And second and it a bit more of objective problems. Reading first chapters and synopsis, you will expect some really evil /bad mc, right? Thinking it's would be someone new, not some struggling bipolar teenagers, who afraid of relationships and afraid of how evil he is, right? Well, **** you, and **** me. That's what you get. Some weird drama, that have no sense giving his background. Some emotional weaknesses, that look like belong in other type of stories. And a lot of lovey-dovey girls, even his yandere skill seems to be a rood. Yeah it's corny, very inconsistent and generally hurt me far more, than I expected it. It's look like different ideas that looks cool in author tastes, from shounen manga fights, some from shoujo dramas, and some from weird comedies, clash together with some angsty edgy stuff, right from 90s. Conclusion, if you come reading synopsis, for some really evil mc or harem without goody two shoes mc, well it's not exactly it. It's not so bad rating still pretty high, but when I look at those two huge problems, and read author thoughts, I became kind of upset. It's really sound like, I know it's stupid, but because I I say it should be so, that means you fall in my plan! - yeah, no. You can just rework you system, at least....

Mr_SlimePB
Mr_SlimePBLv10

thanks for the fanfiction because I really like the fact that you did not write any thing like mc saving someone or mc is weak to girls like other mc where just a random girl glare at mc then he would be scared. I also like the mc's personality because he does not care whether they are girl or boy, he treats them equally true equality where he treats everything equal. I also like it when mc can stop his girls from doing harm to mc, just because they are close to mc does not mean they could or should harm the mc, it is like someone got close to you then gives them the right to hit you just them being unreasonable. I also don't really care if the mc is manipulative because it just makes it more exciting. I don't really care if there are little to no r-18 because it doesn't really matter for me but could you, author, make a line where or if they have s*x just write like after they had s*x or just like time skip it really is ok. overall the fanfic is great for me.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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