Well, you don't need this review, but I do. There is 2 very big problems with this novel, that makes me a bit of mad... As a dork on powers and power-levels, I have a problem with this system. Let me ask you, if you see a 100 thousands points of strength, when an new characters have just 10 in all stats, how strong you think it is? A tricky question, enough to break a wall.... I'm not kidding,okay. Apparently, f class stats in fate takes 400.000 thousands points and would be more than 1000 levels in this system.... How the ****?! All those overpowered skills from fate in ex ratings? Just some little boosts in certain situations and little flat boost to his statistics.... I would call it a scam, but oh well. On the other hands, mc is not op and struggling a lot in fights... That he logically shouldn't. I don't know how to take it, on the one hand, I don't like when all those stats and skills seems to be a scam, on the other, op mc is a bit bland, especially when he's best talent lies in farming... Maybe, you can just rework it? So people have easier time to understand? And second and it a bit more of objective problems. Reading first chapters and synopsis, you will expect some really evil /bad mc, right? Thinking it's would be someone new, not some struggling bipolar teenagers, who afraid of relationships and afraid of how evil he is, right? Well, **** you, and **** me. That's what you get. Some weird drama, that have no sense giving his background. Some emotional weaknesses, that look like belong in other type of stories. And a lot of lovey-dovey girls, even his yandere skill seems to be a rood. Yeah it's corny, very inconsistent and generally hurt me far more, than I expected it. It's look like different ideas that looks cool in author tastes, from shounen manga fights, some from shoujo dramas, and some from weird comedies, clash together with some angsty edgy stuff, right from 90s. Conclusion, if you come reading synopsis, for some really evil mc or harem without goody two shoes mc, well it's not exactly it. It's not so bad rating still pretty high, but when I look at those two huge problems, and read author thoughts, I became kind of upset. It's really sound like, I know it's stupid, but because I I say it should be so, that means you fall in my plan! - yeah, no. You can just rework you system, at least....
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LIKEJust read chapters 19 and 20. If you found that everything alright, then that works for you. If you would have uncontrollable pain in you eyes and head, well... Then walk away.... 😒
Thanks for the review. I'm still working on the system at that time, well, I'm still working on it until now. Still, thanks for reading my fanfic. I'm using this fanfic to know what kind of system I want. You could say that I'm still searching for it.
Could you recommend any OP and anti Hero Novels.. I could be in any platform, not just webnovel so I don't mind. thanks.
the wish of a dragon, still in webnovel
