Becoming eternal, Vampire diaries. ( HIATUS )

A good story. But it suffers heavily from two things: Really bad pacing and a boring MC. 14 chapters in and the MC becomes the most powerful thing in the Universe. He's practically unkillable and nothing is stronger than him - and that's just with his physical prowess and without magic. He became too powerful and too quickly. I'd also like to say that the protagonist is as boring as a brick. Everything he does is calculated - he doesn't feel like anything more than some Original who wants strength and to be the perfect being. He's obsessed with knowledge and that's his only reason to exist. He's literally nothing more than that trait and it's boring to read about. He kills someone. What's the reason? It somehow helped him either grow in strength or gain knowledge. He makes a supernatural-version of the Illuminati. What's the reason? So he can have an information network that has it's fingers in all the pies available and lets the MC control the world from behind the scenes for--you guessed it--more information and power. Don't get me wrong, this story was good and quite interesting. But there's nothing more to it than a simple power-trip. All the MC does is look for more ways to gain power and information. It was fine when it was just a few chapters of that but 14 straight chapters of power-ups? That's a bit excessive. I'd be willing to ignore it as well if the characters were well-fleshed out and fun to read about. Or if there were good interactions in the first place. But no, there's no interesting dialogue between characters because the MC is just cold and uninterested in connecting with people. He doesn't even care about his family - not even when one of them dies. He's got the emotional range of a rock. Everything also seems to go his way and he has a contingency plan for everything. This is an interesting premise for a novel. Very much so. But the bad pacing and flat protagonist just mar this story too much for me, personally.

I’ll say this is the best TVD fanfiction on here. Even if the grammar is a little off, the story and plot is amazing. I just hope you don’t drop it and continue to update it.

What the hell!!!!! It was perfect example of God syndrome. The protagonist had no empathy and next to no fellings. Protagonist was simply a maniac with power of a leach.

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I have not read anything related to vampire diary’s but if the mc gets a harem and it’s full of action I’m in lol honestly even tho I know nothing about vampire diaries I do find the idea of a nifflehime poking around a vampires den amazing lol

This has peaked my interest to bad the aren’t any chapters to read could you please post some more Hffdhhgfffhj hdthbfdfhbbv bhfthnvxdunnxdd jhgfshj iudgvkgff hffbhhgf

Just from having vampire diaries you get 5 stars!! Just from having vampire diaries you get 5 stars!! Just from having vampire diaries you get 5 stars!! Just from having vampire diaries you get 5 stars!! Just from having vampire diaries you get 5 stars!! Just from having vampire diaries you get 5 stars!! Just from having vampire diaries you get 5 stars!!

i think that this story is really good . for one it's original, the author made the effort to make a completely new world and I appreciate it but what's more , the mc is ruthless and evil i love this kind of mc because it's not like watching a show en or a zero to hero no here there is schemes betrayal and more in reality I wrote this review to gain exp

One of the Best Fan-Fic Out There. I Especially Like the MC, not easily distracted by Skirts and Morality. Though a Bit narcissistic, the Guy has Not Gone Beyond a Single Planet and Has Already Concluded He's More Powerful Than The Universe Itself and now Has the Ability to Create His Own Reality, the MC Has Not Even Mastered Time and Space, Damn!!!.

This story is a wonderful one about one family who transcended the bounds of mortals and became the first vampires. It tells the story of one of these family members, a cold, calculating, and scheming one. The MC of this story is the literal example of the last boss, in which he controls the world from the shadows and experiments on people to discover things in both science and magic. The things that are bad with this story is the grammar, it could be a LOT better. But, if you can get past the grammar this story is an excellent one. If you like cold and emotionless/evil MC's then this story is for you.

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Love the concept you have going on for your story! Loving it so far and looking forward for the upcoming chapter! Please no harem because of I have to be honest it doesn't fit with his personality. Nevertheles, Keep up with the great work and work your imagination to the fullest! Hope you update once again sometime soon!

My mom LOVES Vampire Diaries, In the other hand... I only have seen probably 7 episodes of it... But THIS IS GREAT! Good job, I am also wondering if you would consider a Collaboration my Interest and Imaginations are boundless but preferably Fantasy and Horror/Thriller. Since I was a kid I kept writing but I never finish it nor do I ever show it to anyone, I am Lazy but Imaginative. I hope you take my offer of collaboration to be applicable and valid upon its small potential to be. From I who request, Tyrone R!

God's syndrome! the only thing I agree with is knowledge, power, everything else is complete nonsense. He has no friends or family, he thinks that evolution applies to everyone lower than himself. Complete nonsense and why did he decide that he is god?

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this was very interesting I had no idea what was going to happen but the main character of the story I don't know if he's a bad guy or a good guy but I think he just there. the knowledge he wants it's very interesting and the way his character develop over time it was very intriguing but I didn't even finish the story but it's already good enough for me I like this writing very much hope to see more from you.

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