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A cursed young man is thrusted into the Naruto world a few years before the 3rd Shinobi world war. Armed with nothing but the clothes on his back, intelligence, and superhuman instincts, he'll have to give it his all just to survive. Join my discord https://discord.gg/uQUcWbm Ive put my heart and soul, not to mention hours of research, into this novel so at least TRY to be respectful in the comments. Also, cover done by Kaito_Izanaga. Props to you man as you did a bang up job

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RaccoonLeague · 漫画同人
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Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!

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BlackStar_BH · 漫画同人
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WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEYLv13WHAT_NO_MONEY

This novel is overall pretty high tier in comparison to most fan-fics. The author has the MC's personality planned from the get go and although the author is unnecessarily perfectionistic it's still nice to see he cares about his writing and characters. The story is well paced and mainly focuses on the MC's point of view with there being some other characters POVs sprinkled in between. And although usually ot would be to early for such a thing the author seems to make it work. But overall greatest feature has to be that the author has a vision and a basic outline for how he wants the novel to progress, and combined with his obvious passion, which shines through in his writing, creates a story that is as enthralling as it is excellently crafted.

AlphaOmegaDelta
AlphaOmegaDelta作者AlphaOmegaDelta

It's been a minute so I've decided to just smack my own review on my own story. I'll give my own honest opinion on the story and you can judge from there Writing Quality (5 Stars)- I feel pretty good about giving myself a five star review for this category. I'm pretty fluent in English and make few grammatical errors and there are little to no mistakes on my overall chapters. Story Development (4 Stars)- I'm giving myself 4 stars here because of a few things and its probably things you as readers will complain about. Due to the load of fanfics on this site, you've probably seen and taken note of things that you dont like. For Naruto fanfics in particular, and isekai in general, readers dont enjoy when the MC reveals or is known to be from another world. The most common reasoning is that said MC will be held captive and tortured followed by dissection. On this account I would normally agree with you but you have to think about who the current Hokage is, that being Hiruzen Sarutobi. Not to mention that this is an AU so I should be given SOME slack for it. I'd rate myself 3 stars but I believe I'll improve so I'm giving myself the benefit of the doubt. Character Design (5 Stars)- I believe this to be one of my strong points as I genuinely TRY to analyze how each and every character would respond to each scenario given. Some characters are a bit harder to judge then others, mainly being female characters, but I do give it my best shot. While there is room for improvement, I'll give myself 5 stars as a way of motivating myself Updating Stability (5 stars)- I update like a turtle for the moment but itll pick up soon. In truth this is really like 3 stars but I NEED to push myself to do better. World Background (5 Stars)- I feel that I'm doing pretty well in establishing the world so far. Once again this is five stars All in all, I do hope you'll give it a read. I promise that, despite some unrealistic tendencies that may happen, the plot itself and unique way I write will most definitely keep you wanting more. Much love to all of you.

LiaFeil
LiaFeilLv4LiaFeil

The story is good, doesn't feel forced, and there are no grammatical errors either (I might not be appropriate to say it because my own grammar is very messy XD) ... But unfortunately, this story is not my cup of tea ... I don't know the reason is, I just feel that this story doesn't suit me ...

Sh1zuku
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Nice! Really nice pace and a nicely written main character. Pace of story is great, not rushed nor stretched out. This is 100% worth a read.

Septem
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Omipotent_reader
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Author San u are there right............... Please don't drop the novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Dao_Of_Laziness
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I’ve not read this yet because I want to stock chapters so I can binge but im gonna give this fic some love because I’m a sucker for naruto ffs

BleakSky
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Have not read but I like the idea, rating will change later once there's more chapters. Its so I can binge read later, I assume he will be most skilled in kenjutsu, my favorite, love the instincts thing and will be back. GL(good luck) Author. Suprise me! Btw is their any relationships? If so tell me right away as I dont like sakura or hinata though its set before third war so I think we can rule that out. If their is romance can I recommend Mei Terumi or Yugao, reasons? None besides I love them both and well I feel they would just work best but thats me basing it off synposis and cover of the fic.

SDIVAD
SDIVADLv6SDIVAD

Alright, This is an amazing book my only problem is the slight delay/slow updates but other than that this is a 5/5 book. Writing has little to no mistakes 5/5 Update is better than most books but could be worked on 4/5 Story development is amazing this is a unique and a one of a kind story 5/5 Character design is amazing 5/5 World background is great Alpha goes into the naruto World so deep its basically another world 5/5 10000% recommended to read

SabertoothX15
SabertoothX15Lv13SabertoothX15

[Rating 4.2] I’ve not read this yet because I want to stock chapters, so I can binge but I'm going to give this fic some love too.......................

ShadowlessBlade
ShadowlessBladeLv15ShadowlessBlade

Overall an interesting story with a protagonist that does not stop moving forward despite his circumstances and looking forward to more of this fanfiction.

Daolord777
Daolord777Lv12Daolord777

Some fresh dope yo So far so good new ideas not the usual here take a system after i killEd u by Ppoping on you Five star five stars five star stars Five .............................................i need to fill up words

its_over_8000
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Daoist708179
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Please update ..............,....................................................,....................................................,.......................................

book_worm200
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

Wellington_Lucas
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Essa Fanfic é incrível Autor-San, continue assim, eu vejo um grande potencial para ser uma das melhores!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

The_Best_Stalker
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A realy interesting take on a naruto fanfic, i give 5 stars on hope it continues as good .👍👍👍🌟🌟✨⭐👋🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Wxlliam
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this fic is good. i've always wanted to create a fic like this. this trumps with all the dark fanfics out there. its really a breath of fresh air

FuckY0u
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Markin
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Nice book, I like the protagonist and the ambient where he is. The author have a nice writing style, where you can see the world development around the protagonist.

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