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On my phone, so I can't make an indepth review. This fan-fic is really good, I wasn't expecting much going into, and in just a few chapters I'm really interested and looking forward as to where the story will go. Overall good novel, hope you will continue writing. 😁

I've always thought that the idea behind the original novel was interesting, but there were no readable translations. Luckily I found that you picked up this novel and translated it into something that I could read without stopping and trying to comprehend what was going on during the story. Thank you for translating this novel.

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Everything about this story seems good so far. ( Ch. 11) The direction of the story is going in a different than most of the Naruto fan-fics that I've read and that is a good sign. The only thing that comes to a critique would be that the MC giving out information to Minato and Kushina, that he is from a different world, and that Yamanaka ANBU reading his mind, and giving that information to the Hokage. I have read some fan-fics that introduce the fact that they are from a different world and that fan-fic usually doesn't usually go well and drops in quality, but maybe you could pull it off. I'll save this in my library and read it when it updates a little more. Hopefully, your writing turns out well.