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Dantas
DantasLv122yr
2022-09-06 06:23

I really like the author's attention to small details "mistakes" that readers point out because the author looks for what's wrong and fixes it, bought me on the spot so it's 5 stars (Google translator)

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DarkestCalling
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its chunni wish fulfillment story pretty much says it all no real thought process with barely there logic and in most cases not there at all started out alrightish then just got to where mc has an ego the size of a country and the brains of a chihuahua hes not even at an untouchable level of strength in mha and shouldnt even have made it as far as he did with stealing bodies from hospitals to steal and sell quirks overall it readable if you just turn off your brain since most logic isnt there writing quality is low since most reasoning is non existent and plot is the only reason and alot of actions are written like bullet point presentation mc did this then he took a shower mc got ready for his date mc went to the park for his date it's very non descriptive story development is low since the story doesnt flow and the bullet point style is jarring character design mc is like a god complex chihuahua with actual strength but isnt invincible or unbeatable world background its fanfiction so anyone who has watched or read mha should have a good idea of it sadly even with how anime logic filled mha world is this cranks it up to chunni wishfulfillment levels of world logic he turns dead bodies to dust and can absorb the quirk sell it to his system or discard it and decides to steal from hospital morgues yet only action taken is the foreshadowing of a female pro hero seeing him do so yet nothing has happened yet forgetting the fact that he does this to many bodies no loved ones have an outcry about not being able to cremate or bury loved ones no police stings or heroes on all the hospitals no news reports or general social outcry over it in the latest chapter he pretty much killed several cannon fodder and severally injured several others called his pro heroes weak and unable to do anything to him and straight up threatened them to arrest him if they wanted to try midnight could have incapacitated him he still breathes and sleeps and his super regeneration wouldnt work against it since it mimics the bodies reaction to sleep and isn't a poison to fight against but overall they just cowed and let him go considering almight spent his life preparing to fight an egotistical tyrant the similarities with all for one should have been jarring enough he would give his life to stop him but instead didn't just overall world plot just seems to conform so the egotistical wish fulfillment can continue

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