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Star_Ninja
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2022-09-13 03:22

The fanfic is good and the character is Overpowered. I am enjoying the story so please don't drop the fanfic like many other webnovel fanfic authors usually do. I just wish if the story had more characters development and romance. I can understand since the author is new so it's hard for him to write that part.

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Thanks for review. I will try to write the character development part. Let's see how it goes๐Ÿ˜…

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