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Pythia
PythiaLv112yr
2022-09-13 02:47

Another DxD cliche 'take all women and make them virgins for the insecure and hormonal boy writing the book' scenario...Absolute trash, i'm convinced he deletes his bad reviews and/or pays for 5 stars otherwise there's no way it would be anywhere near 5 star rating. Welp he'll likely delete this one too.

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Boss_Ace
Boss_AceAuthor

You haven't even read my fanfic yet and you still gave a review. Just how stupid can people be sometimes. Like seriously my first world is My Hero Academia and not Dxd. So how come you are talking about Dxd here? At least read a little before reviewing instead of ruining my day.

Boss_Ace
Boss_AceAuthor

Also just because I haven't met a person like you who gives bad ratings doesn't mean my other 5 star reviews are fake or I paid for them. They are genuine. If you want to read my fanfic then read otherwise get lost. I am simply writing for fun here. So don't ruin it

Pythia
PythiaLv11

Notice i said 'DxD Cliche' not he's in the DxD world...

Boss_Ace:You haven't even read my fanfic yet and you still gave a review. Just how stupid can people be sometimes. Like seriously my first world is My Hero Academia and not Dxd. So how come you are talking about Dxd here? At least read a little before reviewing instead of ruining my day.
HermanoTaoista_Ero
HermanoTaoista_EroLv4

Es un poco entendible ya que la mayoría de los fanfic de DxD es puro cliché y al ver el título allá entendido de esa manera ya que eh leído muchos fanfic de DxD y no me atraen para nada o simplemente es coleccionar mujeres y ya w⁠(⁠°⁠o⁠°⁠)⁠w

Pythia:Notice i said 'DxD Cliche' not he's in the DxD world...
Pythia
PythiaLv11

No hablo espanol

HermanoTaoista_Ero:Es un poco entendible ya que la mayoría de los fanfic de DxD es puro cliché y al ver el título allá entendido de esa manera ya que eh leído muchos fanfic de DxD y no me atraen para nada o simplemente es coleccionar mujeres y ya w⁠(⁠°⁠o⁠°⁠)⁠w
HermanoTaoista_Ero
HermanoTaoista_EroLv4

It is a bit understandable since most of the DxD fanfic is pure cliché and seeing the title there understood that way since I have read many DxD fanfic and they do not attract me at all or it is simply collecting women... w(°0°)w

Pythia:No hablo espanol
Pythia
PythiaLv11

Ah um. gracias por acomodarme. Is that right?

HermanoTaoista_Ero:It is a bit understandable since most of the DxD fanfic is pure cliché and seeing the title there understood that way since I have read many DxD fanfic and they do not attract me at all or it is simply collecting women... w(°0°)w
HermanoTaoista_Ero
HermanoTaoista_EroLv4

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Pythia:Ah um. gracias por acomodarme. Is that right?
some_writer
some_writerLv4

We don't write novels just 'for fun'. We write because we want to make a mark on the community. You will drop this book eventually because it's too much to handle . Plus I read the whole story and I gotta say, the whole rewriting thing doesn't change anything because it still sucks.

Boss_Ace:Also just because I haven't met a person like you who gives bad ratings doesn't mean my other 5 star reviews are fake or I paid for them. They are genuine. If you want to read my fanfic then read otherwise get lost. I am simply writing for fun here. So don't ruin it
Pythia
PythiaLv11

Yikes. Was it that bad even after a rewrite?

some_writer:We don't write novels just 'for fun'. We write because we want to make a mark on the community. You will drop this book eventually because it's too much to handle . Plus I read the whole story and I gotta say, the whole rewriting thing doesn't change anything because it still sucks.
some_writer
some_writerLv4

Well yeah. The story is clearly rushed . There's no personality in the MC. And I get that you're writing for fun here, but at least put effort into your work lazy boy.

Pythia:Yikes. Was it that bad even after a rewrite?
Carvin_Francis_ces
Carvin_Francis_cesLv4

well of you guys judge so much why do you not write your own book. we'll come on dude you complaint saying it was waste of time the author was just starting he didn't not even at fault he was just a starterEnglish was not my language and I'm using my phone so there maybe alot of error in my grammar

some_writer:Well yeah. The story is clearly rushed . There's no personality in the MC. And I get that you're writing for fun here, but at least put effort into your work lazy boy.
Carvin_Francis_ces
Carvin_Francis_cesLv4

also even I'm not a writer i understand his writing it literally was like a starting book of a writer that had an interes in writing because he read alot of FanFiction or something so ofcourse he will be bad at first not all writter was good at writing in the start it start worse but the more book he/she create they may become better at it

Carvin_Francis_ces:well of you guys judge so much why do you not write your own book. we'll come on dude you complaint saying it was waste of time the author was just starting he didn't not even at fault he was just a starterEnglish was not my language and I'm using my phone so there maybe alot of error in my grammar
Pythia
PythiaLv11

I have... Awkward.

Carvin_Francis_ces:well of you guys judge so much why do you not write your own book. we'll come on dude you complaint saying it was waste of time the author was just starting he didn't not even at fault he was just a starterEnglish was not my language and I'm using my phone so there maybe alot of error in my grammar
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