its chunni wish fulfillment story pretty much says it all no real thought process with barely there logic and in most cases not there at all started out alrightish then just got to where mc has an ego the size of a country and the brains of a chihuahua hes not even at an untouchable level of strength in mha and shouldnt even have made it as far as he did with stealing bodies from hospitals to steal and sell quirks overall it readable if you just turn off your brain since most logic isnt there writing quality is low since most reasoning is non existent and plot is the only reason and alot of actions are written like bullet point presentation mc did this then he took a shower mc got ready for his date mc went to the park for his date it's very non descriptive story development is low since the story doesnt flow and the bullet point style is jarring character design mc is like a god complex chihuahua with actual strength but isnt invincible or unbeatable world background its fanfiction so anyone who has watched or read mha should have a good idea of it sadly even with how anime logic filled mha world is this cranks it up to chunni wishfulfillment levels of world logic he turns dead bodies to dust and can absorb the quirk sell it to his system or discard it and decides to steal from hospital morgues yet only action taken is the foreshadowing of a female pro hero seeing him do so yet nothing has happened yet forgetting the fact that he does this to many bodies no loved ones have an outcry about not being able to cremate or bury loved ones no police stings or heroes on all the hospitals no news reports or general social outcry over it in the latest chapter he pretty much killed several cannon fodder and severally injured several others called his pro heroes weak and unable to do anything to him and straight up threatened them to arrest him if they wanted to try midnight could have incapacitated him he still breathes and sleeps and his super regeneration wouldnt work against it since it mimics the bodies reaction to sleep and isn't a poison to fight against but overall they just cowed and let him go considering almight spent his life preparing to fight an egotistical tyrant the similarities with all for one should have been jarring enough he would give his life to stop him but instead didn't just overall world plot just seems to conform so the egotistical wish fulfillment can continue

Another DxD cliche 'take all women and make them virgins for the insecure and hormonal boy writing the book' scenario...Absolute trash, i'm convinced he deletes his bad reviews and/or pays for 5 stars otherwise there's no way it would be anywhere near 5 star rating. Welp he'll likely delete this one too.

When I said not to drop your fanfic. I did not mean fudging up the story. I just read the new chapter and i was disappointed. This book has no sense of style at all. It's the usual world domination and girl stealing on these types of books. I thought this would satisfy me to some degree but it made a fellow author disappointed and confused. Sure i know you're writing for fun, but at least put effort into this so that fans actually like what you're writing. That's what some of the fans of this book want, an actual good book with some degree of logic in it.

The fanfic is good and the character is Overpowered. I am enjoying the story so please don't drop the fanfic like many other webnovel fanfic authors usually do. I just wish if the story had more characters development and romance. I can understand since the author is new so it's hard for him to write that part.

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this is what i'm looking for .

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Will another giant rise up? Or will it fall like the others? I dare you to drop it to just prove my point ? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??? ?? ???? ?? ?? ?

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