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it's a fanfiction calm down
And dw, I'm happy that I'm receiving feedback so I don't see it as negative
that was the whole point. the orphanage ist't sponsored by anyone. she's just doing it on her own.
yeah transfiguration really is a Ctrl v
yeah you're right 😭 I've not thought about that. my thought was that it was a really poor orphanage made by Rosie who was kicked out of her family. so she has no real support from the government or her family and has to do it all by herself. but I'll think of a way to make it better. tysm for pointing it out!
Thank you for pointing it out! I'll change it tomorrow
yeah I will change it in the future when I have more time
but thank you for your feedback.I'll try to make my characters and their "faction" alignment more clear in the future
not all of the pure blood's are bad. There are a lot of good "light" families or muggleborn families that could open an orphanage and not hire a pureblood bigot and hire someone who knows how to work with children.
in chapter one it says that the matron was removed from her family. she doesn't support the views.
thank you for the comment. I understand their reaction better now. webnovel was giving me trouble when making a chapter for word count so it was easier for me to do it in one. Thanks for the comment!