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Valid one, might elaborate more on it, but def a good call. Thanks
Not sure, this was something I always planned to happen early, if you feel I rushed it I can take that on board although I am many chapters ahead, if others agree I will see about trying to slow down.
Hi. Nope, not sure I have released it yet, but it is explained later on in the 30's something I think.
Good idea.
If I did then I must have copied it from this chapter, urgh. Sorry if this did happen earlier, I thought I wrote he was locating and ensuring the details on the system were usable earlier. I'll take your word for it, as I am so far ahead I honestly forgot a lot of the filler details.
I would have thought she would be on the internet, back then you had less chance of getting something 'personal' and more chance it would be educational, at least that's what I recall, lol.
Nope, needs more powa!! He has one more upgrade before the serum, although not so much an upgrade as a change.
Without re-reading I can only assume I left out the part I meant to put in about meeting her when he collapsed, it was not written at the time but I thought I included it after, maybe I missed it, sorry if I did.
I the comics they all over, in the UK Cap Briton and James Jaspers (Prime minister and one point). After I wrote that and looked it up for you, here are some. Alfie O'Meagan Franklin Richards Jamie Braddock Jr. Legion Mad Jim Jaspers Marquis of Death Matthew Malloy Phoenix Proteus Scarlet Witch Wiccan
When you know the author is not South African.
Agree, I was going to do a reveal after the Mutant war and Inhuman ... thing, but that is a few chapters away so I was worried people were maybe bored.
Correct.
Old age, I swear. Well spotted
Confused here, did you mean to reference the missile crisis?
It happened once before when she became dark, so I used it here, basically, I think all her emotions overflowed, you need to keep in mind she felt almost nothing for a long time. Of course, it was Scott who was lucky in the comic, lol
While in his range he gains their abilities and skills all stacked. Yeah, he was overpowered, that was why they had him in one comic, then gave him a 20 year break, lol.
Think you will enjoy 29 and 30 then.