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Way too confusing… Like what’s going on…. There are missing scenes… like him getting place to place…. Him meeting people in the next chapter with no context beforehand… His powers are just there and not explained or defined. You need a lot of context to fix this.

Paragon

Celelond

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Hmm, are you perhaps referring to the Thomspon's? Some things I leave obscure on purpose as I found in my other book the readers liked it as they got to try to figure it out.