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I Really like this idea. I just hope that mc do role play. For example, he is dev maybe in the new world he can play the role of GOD. Or make mc a bit evil or mc do something like World domination

It was much better than I expected. Definitely a romn I want to read and I'm adding it to my list. Although I do not follow it actively, I will follow it for months, maybe years. please keep writing.

Alright I admit I'm dumb, seeing so many people enjoying this story while I can't make any sense of the story. I read 26 chapters and didn't understand a single fkng word of it. All the time reading this I'm like what's this, who that, what's happening.

It is quite bad author tries to be descriptive but just ends up repeating himself. Als the pacing is all over the place sometimes the story is too fast with minimal detail given. Sometimes the story is too slow to the point where you coule cut off paragraphs worth of descriptions. The chapters are also short and although some things are too descriptive and give useless information some thing are not described enough and they just happen out of no where. Author also just randomly introduces character with no context whats so ever. Good story if you are fine with major inconsistently and having to shut your brain off.

MC was developer for few chapters, then he was player, so title is very misleading. That's why low rating for me.

32 chapters read, you ask me if I recommend this? No, I don't, the author had a good idea but he didn't know how to develop it properly, he constantly adds ideas and subplots that ultimately serve no purpose because the author forgets about it or just ignores it. I kept reading hoping to find a favorable change but no, it did not improve, instead it got worse, anyone can check it by reading the comments of the chapters. To summarize I do not recommend reading this unless you are prepared to lose your right side of your brain, you do not lose neurons you directly lose part of your gray matter reading this fanfic. In addition, the MC is a character who changes personality and way of acting suddenly and at the whim of the author without explanations, it just happens and you have to accept it 🤷

I love 'overlord' novel and every ff related to it. Any random overlord ff with a single chapterwill still earn at least 3 stars from me. So, for me to rate this low, you should know how terrible this novel is. I dont say this lightly but i think author is drunk or on drug when he write this novel since it starts out okay but it keeps getting worse and everything feel out of place. There is no rhyme or reason. One second mc get fired without a reason, and next he is rehired as the head developer. One moment his ex tried to get trick him he got her pregnancy, next she remember they havent slept for years and boom, he shoot her out of nowhere but he walk scot free. One moment mc is happily playing and boom thousands of people die out of nowhere, how? why? who cares, author just take his next hit and goes on another rant. Now you know why this have such a low rating even with the perfect plot template.

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I have seen one fanfic with similar concept but the author dropped it because it wasn't his cup of tea. I hope author of this novel is confident in his work and doesnt leave too many plotholes or unrefined storyline.... because it will be difficult to salvage it later.... but so far so good I genuinely hope author continues it.... u have my full support and power stones

The story was ok for a few chapters, then totally went off the deepend. The story keeps jumping around like the author had no idea where to go. Nothing makes sense and by chapter 30 you will either be brain dead or wish you were. Normally i dont write negative reviews but this is truely something else.

Pretty fking boring. Story is literally dragged on and going nowhere. 34 chapters and the MC isn`t even in the Overlord game yet. The author just wants to drag on chapters forever.

A little change about a new chapter Now I'm being honest in my ratings I know that's a realistic progress but I don't like realistic in fiction, especially fanfiction

It bothers me novels where the protagonist forgets things when it suits the author is ridiculous. and the way to fire him is ridiculous, at most they would have told him to do what the guy asked and that's it,

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This is a good writing, but it has multiple issues. The main concern that I must put emphasis on is that this is less of a fanfic and more of an inspiration type story. It has deferred too much from the plot and setting of Overlord at this point (ch 30). There are smaller issues with the pacing and descriptions, but another big one is writing the character. Author has difficulty describing or giving the character a personality so it switches from a lustful idiot, to a genius evil schemer. Lastly I don’t think he made it into the new world as a developer but instead a basic class in Overlord. Don’t get me wrong I enjoy this story, but there’s issues. Author keeps it interesting though I can say that much. Author good job writing and making this but unless you plan on something big to make it a fanfic again this will probably stay as an inspiration story.

Hi Author Here, this fanfic is originally a scribble to deal with my writter's block when I'm writing my original novel, so the quality isn't top notch, I will try to improve as I go on with this, and this is not a wish fullfilment story where everything goes right, you are free to give constructive criticism, those are pretty much appreciated, for those who curious whether I will drop this fanfic or not, as long as I writting the original novel, I will not drop this.

The way he was fired from the company was not very creative..........................................................................................

It's trash, everything ;-; It's trash, everything ;-; It's trash, everything ;-; It's trash, everything ;-; It's trash, everything ;-; It's trash, everything ;-;

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It painful to see such a good ff dropped because of negative reviews. Why don't they go and comment on other useless ff on the platform, huh? Like the one's GhostyZ writes.. There are many other stupid one's in here