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GodOfDogs
GodOfDogsLv41yr
2023-02-14 12:44

It is quite bad author tries to be descriptive but just ends up repeating himself. Als the pacing is all over the place sometimes the story is too fast with minimal detail given. Sometimes the story is too slow to the point where you coule cut off paragraphs worth of descriptions. The chapters are also short and although some things are too descriptive and give useless information some thing are not described enough and they just happen out of no where. Author also just randomly introduces character with no context whats so ever. Good story if you are fine with major inconsistently and having to shut your brain off.

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GodOfDogs
GodOfDogsLv4

If I could edit reviews this would be 1.5 stars it got worse somehow

Burningnova13
Burningnova13Lv4

GodOfDogs:If I could edit reviews this would be 1.5 stars it got worse somehow
Circlethatone
CirclethatoneLv15

he was right tho

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