It’s a shame I thought this fanfic had real potential. The problem other than ugh development and dialog is that the fanfic strayed to far from the original concept and story it is pulling from. There are quite a few forced scenes and parts that go nowhere; but if your used too reading on here that won’t bother you much. The big problem here is how far from the original story the author moved. the Mc is a dev than loses his job for a stupid reason. Only to get it back after a while but shortly after that him and over 1000 are forced into the NW early. His Npc have too much freedom and knowledge. And there are some odd angel higher beings that have something too do with all of it. The author wrote that they expected a few people not to like what they did with their story and said the whole point of fanfics are to explore the world or something like that. And I do partly agree but at this point the story is too different from what most readers expected and wanted.
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