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The Progenitor

Tác giả: Nashi
Fantasy
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What is The Progenitor

Đọc tiểu thuyết The Progenitor của tác giả Nashi được xuất bản trên WebNovel.Welcome to the Progenitor!A life filled with sickness and failing health, a mind grew and developed in the silence of a hospital. With the company of a VR helmet, he became a god in that world, fighti...

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Welcome to the Progenitor! A life filled with sickness and failing health, a mind grew and developed in the silence of a hospital. With the company of a VR helmet, he became a god in that world, fighting against all odds just to leave his mark. Now that he only has a few days left to live he hears a mysterious female’s voice. ”Crowley, your days are counting down and they only number in the several hours. In this time find out who your killer is. You have until you die to finish this quest.” What does he have to lose? No, the real question is what does he have to gain? Enjoy the story of our hero as he is reborn into a new world with a special power, a new race that he controls! Will he rise to power with his trashy creation magic? Will he die in this new world too, leaving another world where he is only half fulfilled? Who the hell is Dave? Find out by reading The Progenitor! [This is the spiritual rework of the Castle System so there will be many similarities. I just didn't like reading my own work so I put my soul into the rework. I hope you can see the blood, sweat, and tears!] (keywords: Gun, Violence, Video Game, System, Fantasy, War, Kingdom, Building, Hunter, Castle, Reincarnation, Reincarnator, Lollipops, Dave, Progenitor, Rework)

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That night the weather was so cloudy when Alma Wijaya arrived in the center of Jakarta. She brought her pot belly alone to the big city to meet her husband, who had not returned for two months. 'Finally, I arrived at this city. I'm sure my husband will be happy to see me come' Alma muttered while smiling broadly. Armed with the address written on white paper, Alma asked the taxi driver to take him to that address. Unfortunately, her husband no longer lives there. Luckily there was a good person who told me that her husband was in Mention Hill, an elite housing area specifically for the rich. Alma got back in a taxi and asked him to take her to Mention Hill. 'Why is Arfha there? Does he have a business meeting? However, it's already ten o'clock in the evening, chances are he'll be home soon. There's nothing wrong with me waiting for him outside' Alma muttered while catching his breath because he felt a little tight and uncomfortable because of his big stomach. It didn't take long for Alma to arrive at Mention Hill. Again, she had to accept disappointment when she saw the husband she had longed for, instead leaving a luxurious house with a beautiful and slim woman. Arfha and the beautiful girl stood facing each other near the black Ferrari car. who exactly is the girl that is with Arfha? Is Arfha secretly playing behind Alma? Did Alma return to the village or stay quietly in the center of Jakarta with the man who disappointed her?" ................................................................. ............... Find the answer by following each chapter in this novel. If you like it, don't forget to support this novel by giving Power Stone as much as possible. And write your opinion in the review column and comment column so that I can correct what is wrong. One Power Stone and comments or reviews from you guys are my motivation to write. Happy Reading!

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ऑनलाइन गेम ग्लोरी में, ये शिऊ को एक ज़बरदस्त और शीर्ष-स्तरीय खिलाड़ी माना जाता था। लेकिन असंख्य कारणों की वजह से उसे टीम से बाहर कर दिया गया। प्रोफेशनल खेलना छोड़ने के बाद, वह एक प्रबंधक के रूप में इंटरनेट कैफे में काम करता है। जब ग्लोरी ने अपना दसवां सर्वर लॉन्च किया, तो उसके पास दस साल के गेमिंग अनुभव के साथ एक बार फिर खुद को खेल में झोंकने का मौका आया। अपने साथ अपने अतीत की यादें और एक अधूरा, स्व-निर्मित हथियार लेकर, शिखर पर जाने के रास्ते पर उसकी वापसी शुरू होती है! "लड़ने और योजना बनाने के बाद, किसने मेरी महिमा छीन ली? हवा और तूफ़ान के उछाल के बाद भी, मेरे सपने अब भी दिखाई देंगे जैसे कि वे कभी बिखरे ही नहीं थे। अपने सारे वैभव के साथ, मेरा रास्ता कभी नहीं गुमेगा। सबकी नज़रों के सामने, मैं दुबारा लौटूँगा!"

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As the writer I of course, will write this review with my thick skin all over my face area. This is the most beautiful blend of herbs and spices to create a fragrant aroma of a story. With just a little bit of salt added in to enhance the ingredients, and a touch of honey to balance well in the slow cooker. It has a serving size of one person, but if stretched out it can definitely fill the table with many tasty treats. As they say, when life gives you lemons, squeeze them gently over a nice thick slice of chicken and bake at a generous 400 degrees to properly let the juices soak with that citrusy flavor!

Happyhafer
HappyhaferLv5Happyhafer

as of now (chaper 14), the character designs are done really well, they really feel like people, with unique ticks and personalities. 5/5 stars the story devellopment so far is solid, and the pempo just right. well, maybe a little rushed in his mental worlds army growth, but as long as the MC doesn't get too OP too fast from here on, that shouldn't be a problem. 5/5 stars world background. this one was done a bit too detailed for the VR world in the first chapters, the rest is fine, as far as i can tell. 4/5 stars the writing quality has some minor issues. the writer sometimes tries to put two or even three sentences into one without connecting their meaning properly, making them feel weird and very hard to understand. there are also some words that don't quite fit, as if the writer used autocorrect and didn't read it over afterwards. that being said the story is still very much readable, so still 4/5 stars. a last comment to the writer: tone down the quirkiness of the characters a bit and don't let the power levels escalate too fast, and this will be a wonderful story.

Dragon421
Dragon421Lv14Dragon421

Could you please give us some more chapters or tell us if this is on hold or dropped it would be really appreciated... thank you for all that you have done so far is a great story I really do hope that you continue writing this story

NoKannaNoLife
NoKannaNoLifeLv5NoKannaNoLife

Sounds great so far, army/kingdom building novels are my favourite :) The paths of evolution are thought out well. oof my oof or be oofed by the oof'iest oof that ever oofed.

TurtleManiacc
TurtleManiaccLv10TurtleManiacc

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floper
floperLv5floper

its's the same as castle system but with different names. .................................................................................................................. ..........................................................................................................

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