Review Detail of Happyhafer in The Progenitor

as of now (chaper 14), the character designs are done really well, they really feel like people, with unique ticks and personalities. 5/5 stars the story devellopment so far is solid, and the pempo just right. well, maybe a little rushed in his mental worlds army growth, but as long as the MC doesn't get too OP too fast from here on, that shouldn't be a problem. 5/5 stars world background. this one was done a bit too detailed for the VR world in the first chapters, the rest is fine, as far as i can tell. 4/5 stars the writing quality has some minor issues. the writer sometimes tries to put two or even three sentences into one without connecting their meaning properly, making them feel weird and very hard to understand. there are also some words that don't quite fit, as if the writer used autocorrect and didn't read it over afterwards. that being said the story is still very much readable, so still 4/5 stars. a last comment to the writer: tone down the quirkiness of the characters a bit and don't let the power levels escalate too fast, and this will be a wonderful story.