The-E.N.D-King-And-The-Lost-Throne

84. “I’m not exactly sure what happened. Sometimes I remember it one way, sometimes another. If I’m going to have a past, I prefer it to be multiple choice!” – The Joker 95. “The only sensible way to live is without rules.” – The Joker

This is definitely quality work, the scenes are very well described, although not my cup of tea when it comes to genres, it is definitely something anyone could enjoy, the grammar is nigh-perfect,

Few errors here and there but not so much to cause a problem in reading. Cherecter degine is good, well written. Do try to describe the scenry more clearly.

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Nice writing, funny mc, and characters, do have some grammatical errors but it is manageable. The author always updates the chapter and fix the error and make the story interesting. But do make the story a little faster. For reader's enjoyment. Overall this novel does have the potential to become one of the best

Nice work, this work has potential but some language errors you can work on it and do post chapter regularly otherwise it will be a waste of effort.

Love your writing skills and how the first chapter was explained. This book is best... so I'm really recommending this book guys, you'd love it. Author you did a great job!

The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.

Keep it up, this novel is might become one of the decent webs novels if tried a little bit harder. The overall story is good and interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up- you have my support :)

The synopsis is very good and unique, the words are easy to understand too. Reincarnation, journey, magic are my favourite genre. Very Great author. I have add to my library too.

Nice read so far, consistent update rate. good world-building and character development. there is room for vocabulary development so keep working hard. The story is interesting and worth a read.

Awesome!

The story is great, the look is also neet and world background kinda interesting and about errors, there are some errors but they are manageable and unnoticeable.

I like the premise and the idea behind the story; however, I don't think this was executed in a way that shows its full potential. There is a lot of refinement needed which is very common in new authors, and a lot of grammatical errors that need to be fixed. The first impression is everything, I recommend at least fixing up your first few chapters to hook in the reader! I hope my review helped!

I really the way you write your synopsis and first chapter. I love transmigration stories the most and this book really made me happy.I hope everyone give it a chance👍👍👍

A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.

I like the idea the author has, and I could see the potential in this story. I'm interested on how the warriors fit in into all this since it looks to be only mages.

Good novel , with good development so far. The grammar is a bit lacking but the author is doing his best , so I'm gonna leave this review here for other to check this novel out!

Nice chapters but do update regularly. That way readers can enjoy more. Love the father's character and Aquarius. Mc trying to be funny but sometimes humor is not there.

Keep it up, this novel is might become one of the decent webs novels if tried a little bit harder. The overall story is good and interesting. Mc is sometimes funny and a bit emotional. And do develop the sister character more. And try to publish regularly.

I really like the improvement on writing that you made. The characters shows more emotions and more about themselves, the formalities and how you describe them. The plot is getting more interesting.

The overall writing quality is undeniable good, there is some typo here and there but not something can ruin your experience. The highlight of the novel is First-person type of writing with the thought of the MC appear here and there. The positive side is It help to create the character of MC really quickly and give some comedic effect with those "untold words", but also had clear down side, sometime it will interrupt the flow of the plot and conversation. Constant switching between what MC "heard" and "Think" also sometime hard to catch up, if not getting used to it. As other slow-phased novel, the biggest trouble of this book are rather slow character build up and plot line. The world building are completed in first couple chapter, but the plotline(or main target of MC) are yet to appear . Other issue are the characteristic of side-character is weaker compare to the MC. However it just a common problem for these kind of novel. As long as more backstory about character revealed and the story moved forward, this novel could reach a higher peak