kshu_ja

absolutely adore these light novels. The story takes the reader on an amazing and emotional ride through a well-developed world. The protagonist is so likeable, and the reader really gets into his head. Certain events and POV chapters had me crying or gasping in shock.

Love the how story progressing, giving of the similar vivbe as the one piece. Writing style is very good, diffrent from the novel now a days.

You have improved. Nice chapter good way to make the story enjoyable. Focus on writing in arc and charecters setting. In all great novel, good story and love mc.

Cool writing, i hope you can add more episode and update frequently. Love the alexender and carl. Action is well written, some errors are their but not tha big of threat

cool chapter btw! can't wait for the next one.

Nice chapters but do update regularly. That way readers can enjoy more. Love the father's character and Aquarius. Mc trying to be funny but sometimes humor is not there.

Nice work, this work has potential but some language errors you can work on it and do post chapter regularly otherwise it will be a waste of effort.

Good work, keep it up

Nice