good, you improved so much

Good so far. Written interestingly well but English needed some improvement not so much. Love Lyla she looks cute and interesting but I'm waiting for Krishna vajra. I hope the author degin that character well.

Nice writing, funny mc, and characters, do have some grammatical errors but it is manageable. The author always updates the chapter and fix the error and make the story interesting. But do make the story a little faster. For reader's enjoyment. Overall this novel does have the potential to become one of the best

NICE KEEP IT UP