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The Dawn of Heroes

Tác giả: Kotachua
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Humanity was facing an apocalypse that threatened to wipe us off the face of the Earth. To survive, humanity built strongholds and hid within them, and with time, individuals with superpowers were born! Now, the once looming threat awakens once again and threatens the very survival of humanity! This will be a new age of heroes, where many will shed blood and tears to achieve their goals. Join Percy on his mission to protect his loved ones and unknowingly become the greatest hero! System: [Detected spiritual energy source, 'Another' program successfully executed, begin guidance protocol.] Author's Note I'm new to creative writing, so I will deeply appreciate any feedback. Will try to stick to a daily release schedule, but life may sometimes get in my way, hope you will understand. *Announcement* Will be quite busy from 29 Sept till 6 Oct, as I have a design test coming up for a position at a game development company in addition to my current full time internship. Will still try my best to publish 1 chapter a day. But hope you guys will understand if I were to become too busy to follow through.

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The story is still in progress, but the beginning is executed so smoothly that I was pulled in with interest. I won't give examples because that will be spoiling new reader, so they'll just have to read it themselves. Lol, I don't want to spoil anyone. That'll ruin their experience and the author work. But I would say that the story is very similar to those system-like novels. It's not hard to find these kind of plot. But with that said, I think the author will give readers something unique further on in the story. Something that makes this story different from others. As for grammatical issues, there's not much....lol, author, why are your grammar and punctuation game so on point!!! There's a few sentence that I found to have past and present tense together which is kind of confusing. But other than that, the writing quality is one that I truly envy!!! AUTHOR!! As for the background and character design, well, the world background is obvious pointed out as one could see or read from synopsis. But it does leave a bit of mystery as what kind of apocalypse or danger humans are facing. Zombie? Alien invasion? Mutants, etc. All different kind of danger that could push humanity to extinction. Moving on to the character design, the author did a good job on describing the main character and the others. As these descriptive details gives the reader a better understanding of how they look like and act. In overall, the story is heading toward a great plot. A very descriptive story indeed. Keep up the great work!

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