Struggling as a Villain

this just like every other brain rot content same generic mc,plot,character etc to fit all the self insert wish fulfillment fantasy here

This story is one of the best I've seen in all with great character dev and good plot with the perfect cliffhangers

Read till ch 17 The novel is great with very few plot holes that can be used as plot devices later. The Mc seems great, not wimpy and has personality There are yanderes The original world is also significant to the story Almost everything is great, except: Having only 17 free ch is a wasted opportunity, a huuuge waste I really want to read more but I would need to use my hard earned FP but I am not that invested in the story yet(cuz only 17 ch duh) I would rather spend those FP on novels that I am already following I wanted to read more but... :(

So, I thought why not? What can you expect from this story? Good interaction. Good Character Development. Okay-ish battles. Good romance+ eventual smut. And a load of Slice of Life. If you have any questions regarding the story, ask here.

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Author, could you add some beautiful pictures on this page so readers don’t have to keep going back and forth between chapters just to view them? Also, could you share the Discord invite link for this novel so we can hang out? You have a unique story, but one thing I’d like to see improved is how you switch between the two worlds. The sections about the sister and the MC feel a bit disjointed. Overall, I enjoy the novel and don’t want to leave a bad review. I just hope to see some improvements and even better chapters moving forward.

Definitely a banger novel, read till 18 chapters and safe to say i found a masterpiece, author don't drop and please be consistent with the update, I really like the story, the mc and his interaction with other characters.

The book is great, undated are stable but wish there was more chapters, and it’s a enjoyable read. 👍

Garbage and not for me…goodluck to everyone else though

the power scale was a mesh, mc not using the system to the fullest was also stupid. also too many changes pov that it become confusing to understand.

Thank goodness this app has limited free days. The story is better then I thought it would be, going forward, i will continue reading and will start purchasing chapters.

To be honest, I liked your other novel but this one is something I'm disgusted with. I don't know why people like this novel, it's beyond my understanding.

So far I’m hooked. I haven’t reached that far into story but the mystery between both of the worlds is piquing my curiosity and let’s not forget the yandere mother in his current world and yandere sister in original. Keep up the good work

<<CONTAIN SPOILERS>> Good--> The Protagonist's personality has been consistent throughout the novel. Although he is quite immature and extremely easy-going and extremely kind to everyone, there is a certain side of ruthlessness in him when it matters. So I guess that's the benefit you get from this novel. The world-building is fine. Good world-building, good history. Rankings are also good. Overall, it's a good novel. . Bad---> But what I would say is, the system given to the main character just disappears for tens of chapters. Except for the first few chapters, where the mc uses the system with a brain, I loved those chaps. He could help his sister, who was on earth with his system... i liked that. The development of the main character in terms of strength is unclear.....like.super unclear. The benefits of the system itself is quite unclear..except for the first few chaps. You can remove the entire system concept and the novel would be no different in the later parts. . For example, there is this one power the system gives.... to look into the minds of the heroines (op right??), and the main character does not use it at all.... like fucking at all!!! And just before a major incident where a whole group of people targets the MC, like basically a day before that major incident, MC suddenly remembers he got some power like this, and looks into the mind of a minor heroine, and well, the next day he is ready for the major incident. There are inconsistencies like that, inconsistencies in strength, inconsistencies in the use of the system. And the other thing I would say is, this novel contains a whole lot of overcoming obstacles through friendship and love. You know the One Piece type shit? This novel contains a fuckload of it. I'll give you an example. The woman who did not accept the love of the main character in his first life, ends up being one of his women later. . This woman, throughout like 150 chapters, was in love with the protagonist.... like the real protoganist of this world. She broke up the engagement with MC in the first few chaps too.... . So basically, this woman was in love with the protagonist in the initial timeline, fought the MC, and the MC died because of this woman. In this timeline, aka in the current story progress, this woman, throughout the novel, somehow forgets his love for the protagonist, and ends up being the main character's woman.... tf??? Another spoiler would be, the main character's grandmother attacks him, trying to kill him, because she owes some guy a favor, right? MC forgives her cuz her picture has been framed by his motner's bedside. Can you fucking believe it? . I don't know about you, but this is kind of a deal breaker for me, because it's fucking bullshit, right? . The whole lot of enemies, traitors, ends up being....through friendship, tears, and Naruto-like conversation, turn to the main character's camp. Other than that, it's an overall good novel. If the MC had a scheming side, this novel would be in ranking.

One of the few books I really enjoyed in a long time. I initially assume it’s a generic transmigration story. But the author really did good job of adding all the elements of the story together. Another good thing is unlike most “extra” story the mc does not act weak and hide his strengths. We finally have a strong and confident mc. The story progresses at a decent pace and is finally coming to a well written ending. The story has it all, well liked and memorable characters, good premise, world building and good writing quality. I know this might seems odd but this is one of the books I feel like I would want to read again just because it was such a good experience. I highly recomend this book.

Really good transmigration story with an interesting premise. Bellarine is best girl btw.

Yandere supremacy 😤 Five stars all the way!

If I had money, I would definitely read all the chapters of this delight. **********************************************************************************

It's a good book, but 15 chapters are too few to read, so I don't think it's possible to make a review .................................................

The book has potential i must say so I'd recommend it to y'all to read. I know WB has done a number on us with the poison we've read but try this book. I was also hesitant but I gave it a try and I'm enjoying it right now. I usually dislike giving book reviews but for this one it definitely has potential to be very good if the author is consistent with what he has shown so far. For writing quality it's one of if not the best I've seen on Webnovel so a 5. For the story development, so far it's looking good and we are looking to see what the author plans to do so a 4, character design is great, the relations between the characters in the story allows you the reader to immerse yourself in the story without making the story feel bland, it's realistic enough and you can see that thought and creativity were put behind the dialogues and interactions, so that's a 5. World background I give a 3 cos so far there hasn't been any real expansion on the world in general and how things work, from culture to the food, to even the currency and the continents and races and what not but I'm sure it will be properly expanded on in the academy arc so a 3 for now. Lastly my issue is the updates it's a bit inconsistent but manageable, though i hope there will be consistency in updates pretty soon cos for a book to survive on Webnovel consistent updates is a must, else this book won't survive and it has a good potential so i wanna see this book become quite renowned, hence overall the book rating is a 4 for now and subject to a possible edited review if the book goes far and doesn't get dropped.