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THEENDERMAN
THEENDERMANLv33mth
2024-08-17 01:56

This story is one of the best I've seen in all with great character dev and good plot with the perfect cliffhangers

Struggling as a Villain

RashCore
4.2
187 Chs

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RashCore
RashCoreAuthor

Thanks for the review 😊

3mth
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BalsamicThunThighs
BalsamicThunThighsLv15

Lol It kind of concerns me when I see a review tell me "one of the best I've seen" in it with no other detail about the story, characters or world building added. Almost feels like a bot or a butt licker. I'll give it a try though.

2mth
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THEENDERMAN
THEENDERMANLv3

Try it you'll be satisfied with the story

BalsamicThunThighs:Lol It kind of concerns me when I see a review tell me "one of the best I've seen" in it with no other detail about the story, characters or world building added. Almost feels like a bot or a butt licker. I'll give it a try though.
2mth
1
BalsamicThunThighs
BalsamicThunThighsLv15

I'll be honest it's okay. It doesn't really catch my interest and it's funny cause I do enjoy these type of novels but this one just isn't working it for me personally. Not a big fan of the whole my power up system goes to my sister but I get some benefits.

THEENDERMAN:Try it you'll be satisfied with the story
2mth
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Azrael_DAngel
Azrael_DAngelLv14

Your best doesn't mean everyone's best though

BalsamicThunThighs:Lol It kind of concerns me when I see a review tell me "one of the best I've seen" in it with no other detail about the story, characters or world building added. Almost feels like a bot or a butt licker. I'll give it a try though.
1mth
BalsamicThunThighs
BalsamicThunThighsLv15

After about 80 chapters it definitely is not one of the best. If this is one of their best reads, I hope they read other works.

Azrael_DAngel:Your best doesn't mean everyone's best though
1mth
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Azrael_DAngel
Azrael_DAngelLv14

the novels you are reading currently(from ur pfp) make me sleepy

BalsamicThunThighs:After about 80 chapters it definitely is not one of the best. If this is one of their best reads, I hope they read other works.
1mth
DaoistjQtMkq
DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Can anyone tell me mc personality in this novel.

1mth
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SOULONFLAME
SOULONFLAMELv3

Read till ch 17 The novel is great with very few plot holes that can be used as plot devices later. The Mc seems great, not wimpy and has personality There are yanderes The original world is also significant to the story Almost everything is great, except: Having only 17 free ch is a wasted opportunity, a huuuge waste I really want to read more but I would need to use my hard earned FP but I am not that invested in the story yet(cuz only 17 ch duh) I would rather spend those FP on novels that I am already following I wanted to read more but... :(

3mth

Rayyer
RayyerLv14

this just like every other brain rot content same generic mc,plot,character etc to fit all the self insert wish fulfillment fantasy here

2mth
DT_Ade
DT_AdeLv13

Reveal spoiler

2mth
RashCore
RashCoreAuthor

So, I thought why not? What can you expect from this story? Good interaction. Good Character Development. Okay-ish battles. Good romance+ eventual smut. And a load of Slice of Life. If you have any questions regarding the story, ask here.

3mth
Berry_Smoothie
Berry_SmoothieLv15

The book is great, undated are stable but wish there was more chapters, and it’s a enjoyable read. 👍

4mth
FIPEN
FIPENLv2

Author, could you add some beautiful pictures on this page so readers don’t have to keep going back and forth between chapters just to view them? Also, could you share the Discord invite link for this novel so we can hang out? You have a unique story, but one thing I’d like to see improved is how you switch between the two worlds. The sections about the sister and the MC feel a bit disjointed. Overall, I enjoy the novel and don’t want to leave a bad review. I just hope to see some improvements and even better chapters moving forward.

1mth
Kary_KD
Kary_KDLv13

Definitely a banger novel, read till 18 chapters and safe to say i found a masterpiece, author don't drop and please be consistent with the update, I really like the story, the mc and his interaction with other characters.

3mth
jayjay_123
jayjay_123Lv13

Garbage and not for me…goodluck to everyone else though

23d
Holden_Makok
Holden_MakokLv15

Thank goodness this app has limited free days. The story is better then I thought it would be, going forward, i will continue reading and will start purchasing chapters.

3mth
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