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2024-09-15 09:35

Review up to chapter 71 The idea of the regression of heroines and the idea of the parallel / future world mean that history and future development can have many mysteries and ways to follow. The descriptions of the characters of the 3 heroines, of the mother (sister?)and Lilia are well made and make it clear what kind of people they are and how they would behave. The newcomer (Amelia) as well as Ethan and the fourth heroine are still to be discovered while the main problem concerns the main character. Richard is flat: he knows that heroines may suspect him but being carried away by events makes him weak despite the fact that he continues to train to become stronger. Unlike them, he knows that they know the future and knows all their future characters, strengths and weaknesses as well as all their secrets so he can make patterns put them in their place. Right now he looks like just someone who doesn't want to be helpless but isn't determined enough to take his new life in hand. The fact that you don't take full advantage of the system is also unnerving ... The system can help him in everything, even to become a demon King from what he says, so why not use it in his training? Furthermore, when he finishes the missions, despite doing it for his sister, he does not rush to redeem his reward but also keeps days waiting and it has also happened that he has not used the Stat after the end of the mission. The functionality of reading Emily's thoughts has never been used or she could have found out what the other 3 heroines were plotting. However, the real problem with the novel at the moment is people's scale of strength: it is totally busted. Various sentences and various situations so far have led to total confusion ... I give examples: 1) Eleonor is told that the Duchess is an entity close to divinity beyond rank. From such an entity I expect his perception to be out of scale so that Eleonor does not even dare to "control" it but instead is not even discovered; 2) Lilia's mother is an adventurous S-Rank and Lilia herself is stronger than she ... Although the adventurers ranking is not the same as the wizards, how are they classified? Based on the ether in their nuclei? Or based on certain tests in the 4 fundamentals? According to Eleonor's words at the moment they have 1/10 of their previous strength however Elizabeth did not think she had problems manipulating the mind of Lilia's mother and Lilia herself so this implies that their "Skills" of past life make them be stronger than an S-Rank despite having 1/10 of their past ether. It seems to me really too confused. I understand that the proficiency in the bases as well as the knowledge of higher spells can make them better in their own rank or even in 1/2 higher however I believe that well-defined walls must be imposed in the levels of force that cannot be overtaken otherwise even if characters like Bellarine are described as the strongest if an Elizabeth is enough to control her, she looks like a joke. However there is a lot of tasty food on this table if the author manages to organize the dishes it could be a great meal, good luck Chef.

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Totally agree, i hope author make the power scale as clear as possible.

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