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2024-09-15 09:35

Review up to chapter 71 The idea of the regression of heroines and the idea of the parallel / future world mean that history and future development can have many mysteries and ways to follow. The descriptions of the characters of the 3 heroines, of the mother (sister?)and Lilia are well made and make it clear what kind of people they are and how they would behave. The newcomer (Amelia) as well as Ethan and the fourth heroine are still to be discovered while the main problem concerns the main character. Richard is flat: he knows that heroines may suspect him but being carried away by events makes him weak despite the fact that he continues to train to become stronger. Unlike them, he knows that they know the future and knows all their future characters, strengths and weaknesses as well as all their secrets so he can make patterns put them in their place. Right now he looks like just someone who doesn't want to be helpless but isn't determined enough to take his new life in hand. The fact that you don't take full advantage of the system is also unnerving ... The system can help him in everything, even to become a demon King from what he says, so why not use it in his training? Furthermore, when he finishes the missions, despite doing it for his sister, he does not rush to redeem his reward but also keeps days waiting and it has also happened that he has not used the Stat after the end of the mission. The functionality of reading Emily's thoughts has never been used or she could have found out what the other 3 heroines were plotting. However, the real problem with the novel at the moment is people's scale of strength: it is totally busted. Various sentences and various situations so far have led to total confusion ... I give examples: 1) Eleonor is told that the Duchess is an entity close to divinity beyond rank. From such an entity I expect his perception to be out of scale so that Eleonor does not even dare to "control" it but instead is not even discovered; 2) Lilia's mother is an adventurous S-Rank and Lilia herself is stronger than she ... Although the adventurers ranking is not the same as the wizards, how are they classified? Based on the ether in their nuclei? Or based on certain tests in the 4 fundamentals? According to Eleonor's words at the moment they have 1/10 of their previous strength however Elizabeth did not think she had problems manipulating the mind of Lilia's mother and Lilia herself so this implies that their "Skills" of past life make them be stronger than an S-Rank despite having 1/10 of their past ether. It seems to me really too confused. I understand that the proficiency in the bases as well as the knowledge of higher spells can make them better in their own rank or even in 1/2 higher however I believe that well-defined walls must be imposed in the levels of force that cannot be overtaken otherwise even if characters like Bellarine are described as the strongest if an Elizabeth is enough to control her, she looks like a joke. However there is a lot of tasty food on this table if the author manages to organize the dishes it could be a great meal, good luck Chef.

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DisgruntledReader
DisgruntledReaderLv12

Totally agree, i hope author make the power scale as clear as possible.

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AnotherMadKat
AnotherMadKatLv15

<<CONTAIN SPOILERS>> Good--> The Protagonist's personality has been consistent throughout the novel. Although he is quite immature and extremely easy-going and extremely kind to everyone, there is a certain side of ruthlessness in him when it matters. So I guess that's the benefit you get from this novel. The world-building is fine. Good world-building, good history. Rankings are also good. Overall, it's a good novel. . Bad---> But what I would say is, the system given to the main character just disappears for tens of chapters. Except for the first few chapters, where the mc uses the system with a brain, I loved those chaps. He could help his sister, who was on earth with his system... i liked that. The development of the main character in terms of strength is unclear.....like.super unclear. The benefits of the system itself is quite unclear..except for the first few chaps. You can remove the entire system concept and the novel would be no different in the later parts. . For example, there is this one power the system gives.... to look into the minds of the heroines (op right??), and the main character does not use it at all.... like fucking at all!!! And just before a major incident where a whole group of people targets the MC, like basically a day before that major incident, MC suddenly remembers he got some power like this, and looks into the mind of a minor heroine, and well, the next day he is ready for the major incident. There are inconsistencies like that, inconsistencies in strength, inconsistencies in the use of the system. And the other thing I would say is, this novel contains a whole lot of overcoming obstacles through friendship and love. You know the One Piece type shit? This novel contains a fuckload of it. I'll give you an example. The woman who did not accept the love of the main character in his first life, ends up being one of his women later. . This woman, throughout like 150 chapters, was in love with the protagonist.... like the real protoganist of this world. She broke up the engagement with MC in the first few chaps too.... . So basically, this woman was in love with the protagonist in the initial timeline, fought the MC, and the MC died because of this woman. In this timeline, aka in the current story progress, this woman, throughout the novel, somehow forgets his love for the protagonist, and ends up being the main character's woman.... tf??? Another spoiler would be, the main character's grandmother attacks him, trying to kill him, because she owes some guy a favor, right? MC forgives her cuz her picture has been framed by his motner's bedside. Can you fucking believe it? . I don't know about you, but this is kind of a deal breaker for me, because it's fucking bullshit, right? . The whole lot of enemies, traitors, ends up being....through friendship, tears, and Naruto-like conversation, turn to the main character's camp. Other than that, it's an overall good novel. If the MC had a scheming side, this novel would be in ranking.

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