Red Nara

the story's probably one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read on this app but the problem is that the constant amount of grammar mistakes make it worse and ruin the immersion like they call the nine tails kurama, call root "ne", calling the MCs mum the wrong name and just swapping words around. author please proof read your chapters before you post them

A beta MC that all the women seem to want to jump into and all the men want to MC their wives to. This novel is complete nonsense, it's a waste of my time

an excellent novel. an uzumaki/nara is a new and interesting combination. this is definitely worth checking out

Very unique. very interesting. it's slow paced, but still managed to hook you up. Just hope the chapter release would be fast too.

Slow development, 100 chapters and he's still a child, a very long training arc and counting!!. grammar is okay but names are confusing u need to think hard to understand who or what they're talking about. still looking forward to his growth maybe on 200 chapters based on its development, that is if the novel didn't drop.

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the world building is interesting and the scenario is quite entertaining but, there are a lot of grammatical errors. They become bad enough that the meaning of sentences are reversed. The best example is the description, that says that the story happens after the manga even though it actually happens during the second great ninja war. If you can ignore those errors, then go ahead and read, it's an entertaining story

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well i have to say i am really surprise with this ... mmm the situation and changes are really logical ... the talent and the efford and developed of mc until here is really good

I'm enjoying the story, it's been great so far. The only thing you need to watch out for is how often his moms name or family name are messed up. Otherwise, it's a great read.

story is very good at the beginning but it is starting get boaring to read after 100 chapters

great fanfic. on patreon have more chapters

interesting combination, i like the character bg and development

GREAT STORY, THE AUTHOR IS NOT AFRAID TO MOVE WITH THE ORIGINAL PLOT (THANKS TO KAMI-SAMA) SO YOU WON'T READ A GENERIC STORY OF A SUPER OP MC THAT DOESN'T CHANGE THE MAIN STORY. THE GOAL OF THIS NOVEL IS TO CREATE AS MUCH BUTTERFLY EFFECT AS POSSIBLE, AND I DARE SAY THAT THE AUTHOR IS DOING IT WONDERFULLY. THERE IS ONLY ONE NEGATIVE POINT, THE CHAPTERS ARE SHORT. THANK YOU AP AUTHOR FOR THIS BRILLIANT WORK

Read good fanfic. One of the best for naruto fanfics although the story development is dreadfully slow, but slow development has its own charms Anyway I wanted to give it a 5 star bot some plot holes made me change the decision. But for a project this big I agree that some plotholes are inevitable. Anyway good read

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I don't have the words, it's just incredible, I'm having a great time with your fanfic, just disappointed to have finished the available chapters

One of the best Naruto fanfiction and has huge growth potential. The characters are well developed, showing the time and effort that MC spends on increasing strength as well as developing his relationships with other characters.

You have a decent idea for your story but given the amount of miss spelled words it diluted your story. Also, this could just be me but if I am wanting to read a fanfic about something like naruto or one piece. I would prefer to have the mc getting involved with characters from the work.Even so I understand your options are a little limited give the time period your mc was born in if you go with an oc try your best to add pictures to the paragraph you are describing them.