NbRust

You have concerns about the lowering quality with Mc relationships but ok with the Mc being completely weak!!!!! The priorities are complete messed up

What’s the timeline in this story and why is the Mc so young??? Is there a 5 yrs timeskip to be expected cuz it ain’t interesting reading a story of a 13yr old Mc

Reminds me of those Chinese cultivation fics where Mc has a legendary physique and is expected to be the best in talent but becomes the worst because of the amount of resources Mc requires to improve

Need some clarification because this became hella confusing. You reincarnated and your name is Adam you have an ex girlfriend named Amy Duncan and ppl in the previous chapter referred to the Mc as Adam. Now in chapter 3 how in Gods good name do we get to Amy Duncan being his mother and his name turning to PJ???????

New title for this story: The time I got time I got reincarnated into Naruto and became a phedophile!!

This entire chapter is just forcing plot because you’re telling me that Mc could have sense Zetao appearing behind him and resurrecting Madara???

This plot twist made me realize something where the heck is Kagami Uchiha and Nawaki Senju???

Honestly what’s the reason for delaying the Mc from taking action???

Honest question, why can’t the ultimatrix just remove Zs’skyar conscience? With so many security measures just to block it why not have security measures to remove it?

Would have gone with Umbreon and catch an elekid for my electric type