the story's probably one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read on this app but the problem is that the constant amount of grammar mistakes make it worse and ruin the immersion like they call the nine tails kurama, call root "ne", calling the MCs mum the wrong name and just swapping words around. author please proof read your chapters before you post them

A beta MC that all the women seem to want to jump into and all the men want to MC their wives to. This novel is complete nonsense, it's a waste of my time

an excellent novel. an uzumaki/nara is a new and interesting combination. this is definitely worth checking out

Slow development, 100 chapters and he's still a child, a very long training arc and counting!!. grammar is okay but names are confusing u need to think hard to understand who or what they're talking about. still looking forward to his growth maybe on 200 chapters based on its development, that is if the novel didn't drop.

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the world building is interesting and the scenario is quite entertaining but, there are a lot of grammatical errors. They become bad enough that the meaning of sentences are reversed. The best example is the description, that says that the story happens after the manga even though it actually happens during the second great ninja war. If you can ignore those errors, then go ahead and read, it's an entertaining story

well i have to say i am really surprise with this ... mmm the situation and changes are really logical ... the talent and the efford and developed of mc until here is really good

I'm enjoying the story, it's been great so far. The only thing you need to watch out for is how often his moms name or family name are messed up. Otherwise, it's a great read.